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Light Moves Reflectively

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Light Moves Reflectively

There’s a pitter patter sound like a pout From swiftly moving water all about There’s an image, a surely intense sight Where light moves reflectively all the night Wrapping a shawl on you for protection Seeing moisture down the intersection The soothing rhythm abounds all around This movement barely makes even a sound The awesome motions which is created By the great skies love, passion elated Joy is fulfilled thru the streets of the town This timepiece brings ecstasy not a frown
Russell Sivey Contest: Rain, Rain, Rain Sponsor: Francine Roberts 5/26/2013

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  1. Date: 5/27/2013 11:45:00 AM
    Downright winsome, russell.. i like the emotional appeal of this piece and its flowing cadence... brillliantly executed as awlay, my friend... greeeat stuff!..:)

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 9:29:00 AM
    Closing my eyes I felt the drops of rain falling so real from the sky and the heart into ecstasy went! Another...Rembrandt! Excellent poetry!

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 3:48:00 PM
    Elegance flows like magic in your poem the the Rain contest Russell. This is magnificent, a nostalgic feel to this. Thanks for commenting on my poem Something Sinister for a contest. It reminds me of when you and I had our Halloween poetry fest which we are definitely going to do again this year my friend. Have a great weekend. Hugs and luv, Gail