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Unpredictable

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Below is the poem entitled Unpredictable which was written by poet Connie Gildersleeve. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Unpredictable

I think the rain has to be my muse.
Sheets of unbent rain does fall.
Threads of silver drifting down,
Flowing through my pen effectively 
To quench my poetic thirst through verse

Impressive an unpredictable, it is,
Just like Mother Nature's moods.
It's so romantic and enlightening,
Or so raw and dramatic in it's fury.
The only thing predictable 
Is the unpredictability of it's swarths.


05/26/2013

For Francine Roberts's contest, 'Rain Rain Rain'

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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:11:00 AM

    Enjoyed reading your work..I also enjoy the rain, fog and cloudy skies..Great work penned..Thanks for your visit...Sara

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 7/25/2013 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sara thank you for your visit and lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 6/1/2013 7:48:00 AM

    Wonderful poem. The rain has many moods, and all are inspiring.

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/2/2013 6:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for visiting and leaving a comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/31/2013 3:50:00 AM

    Comgratulations are DEFINITELY in order...This is a real beauty...Love the last 2 lines especially - Tim

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 4:46:00 PM

    Congratulations Connie. My poem is proud to share space with your poem. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/30/2013 6:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Joyce. Thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciates. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 2:51:00 PM

    congrats on a very nice win. BG

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/30/2013 6:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Barbara thank you for the congratulation. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 11:42:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Connie

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/30/2013 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joseph for the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:34:00 AM

    The last stanza says it all.........unpredictable indeed!!! What a sweet poem, Connie......congratulations!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/30/2013 6:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Carrie thank you for the congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:20:00 AM

    Big congrats on your outstanding win. AO

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/30/2013 6:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 8:42:00 AM

    Congrats on your second place win in my contest Connie

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/30/2013 6:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm delighted you liked my poem well enough for a 2nd place win. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 2:33:00 PM

    Very nice poem here! Your thoughts on the rain are fresh and dramatic.

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/28/2013 1:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Isaiah thank you for visiting and leaving a comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 10:32:00 AM

    very nice write Connie.... I Like that last stanza....thank you for commenting on my poem...best wishes for the contest

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/28/2013 1:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joseph for stopping by and leaving a comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 3:27:00 PM

    Wow, this is a wonderfully enlightening write my friend! I am so impressed with your ideas that you presented within this awesome poem! What a lovely piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/26/2013 5:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell for your kind comment. It means a lot. Wishing you a terrific Memorial Day. Warm Smiles, Connie