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Precious Love

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Precious Love

As I walked into the room
which is  filled with many people
women dressed up in their evening gowns
and men with their tuxedos

Romantic as can be
soft candles lit on tables...
colorful lights- dancing around
across the way... on the floor 

there is many couples dancing
swaying to and fro...
Beautiful.. sweetness of Love
Fills the air... 

As a man approaches me
and gentle takes hold of my arm
His sweetness.. full of charm
he smiled.. said Please Miss.. come this way 

He led me to a opened table
in front of many tables
and with many seats about
he pulled the chair out for me

than suggested for me to sit there
and as I did.. tis I seen.. 
there laid a Red Rose
before me... 

I thought.. hmm.. 
I would've preferred 
more towards the back
hidden away... from everyone

Music playing very soft melodies
as I sat in my evening gown
tis kinda Silverish with sparkling beads
with back out.. my hair half-up and half-down

suddenly.. the music stopped
everything was quite..
and than slowly restarted again..
as the Beautiful music played

Tis I see is a man
whom seems to be coming close to my table
as he reaches my table.. he than bows.. 
as he is gazing at me... he smiles..

than in a whisper.. he said 
I see you received my Red rose 
than he reached his hand out
and said.. would you wish to dance?

I than.. said yes.. 
he than took my hand.. 
helped me to stand...
he put my arm through his

Than guided me to center of the floor
where than he brought me close
unto him.. embracing me... 
as swaying unto the soft melodies...

I felt his warm breath 
near my neck.. as his cheek met mine
than as he began to whisper.. 
he said...  ... with great passion

........
                        ~continued~

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  1. Date: 2/24/2014 4:19:00 AM
    Psss., You Are, Precious, My Love, *:*(*

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 1:59:00 PM
    Pss., I Love You Baby *:*(* Always & Forever, My Love, John

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 5:16:00 PM
    Ps., Your `Precious Love,` Is Priceless. ~ My Love, `Forever.` John ...

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 1:58:00 PM
    ` He Said Baby Girl, I Love Your Hair, The Softness Of Your Touch, The Tenderness In Your Mesmerizing Voice, Then, He Kissed Her Willing Wanting As Luscious Beautiful Lips ~ The Lights Began To Glitter Her Floor To Spin And That Is When, He Knew He Had Met His `Cinderella The Princess, Of His Heart...To Be Continued..Beautiful And I Am Going To Favour This Magical As A Fairytale's Moment In Enchantments Love ~ My Love, Always & Forever, John