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Hour

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Below is the poem entitled Hour which was written by poet Elai Cee. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Hour


                      Humans wake up don’t waste the rushing hour
                          Your children looking at what you've done
                               Depend their future on your hand
                                     Counting the near days
                                         To draw their fate
                                               Hey again!
                                                    You!
                                                    See!
                                               Well stand!
                                          Tame time stared
                                       Waiting to see the new
                                 The novel bright, significant sun 
                           Lifting your sorrow unchain for tomorrow   
                       Work hard aim big to gain the dream dreamed

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  1. Date: 6/1/2013 5:40:00 PM
    That's new to me, i have to say not only is it a powerful poem, the word play is very intellegent. I like this one alot!

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 6/1/2013 7:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Timothy. appreciate it!
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 10:24:00 AM
    I really like the formatting that you did here, Elai-- and I agree with Eileen, this can be listed under shape poetry. This is a nice wake up call, so to speak.

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 6/1/2013 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks P.Ink
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 10:36:00 AM
    This is lovely! It could go under shape poem as well. I LOVE that last line...really brings the message home! :) Thanks for your visits! :)

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/24/2013 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    welcome lovely... thank you too
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 8:21:00 AM
    The power of the hourglass. Time contained, but unstoppable. This was awesome!

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/24/2013 8:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Drake. u'r wonderful!