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Nightly Gazing

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Nightly Gazing

Sweet the moon upon vexed clouds that pass
And the silver dew upon the grass it shimmers
The howling creatures stirs in exultant a blast
Praise wonderous night soft spun glimmers.

When saunter I,on sober fields rich in red
The fragrant scent wild doth alarm my senses
Those carnal springing flowers burns my head
In rapture my soul breaks to her eminences.

In loneliness I sat watching light blue stars
Smiling across the wrinkled bloom of roses
In comely they swell across heaven's bars
Upon the lustrous fields their light reposes.

Now if life was not written in darker dooms
I'd gaze the night through a thousand moons.

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  1. Date: 12/27/2013 2:22:00 PM

    I'd gaze the night throug a thousand moon! Waoo! This is serious and gripping. I find ds poem so lovely.

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 1:43:00 PM

    So true! This is a fantastic piece of work!... I felt like I was reading one of my own poems. Because, our themes are so similar.... Lovely, I enjoyed it!...Thank you for the kind comments on my poem "Mystic Moon". It means a lot!

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 9/16/2013 9:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Kelly. I comment on your poems because I truly enjoy your work.
  1. Date: 8/19/2013 7:21:00 AM

    You indeed are an accomplished writer, I can see you love language. A belated welcome to the soup. I see you have gained mor friends along the way. Thanks for stopping and commenting on my piece.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/19/2013 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard for your lovely review. Yes I love language but sometimes I have trouble with my grammar a bit. But otherwise my thoughts are plenty that I would like to share.
  1. Date: 8/12/2013 6:08:00 AM

    There is a flow to this piece that i love. From begining to end it holds the attention. An excellent write Mustapha. Have a nice day....Michael.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/18/2013 8:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Michael for your lovely review.
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 2:05:00 PM

    very lovely imagery in this one. I thought I would see your very first post so I can more easily find poems to comment on now!

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/7/2013 7:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Andrea,thats very sweet of you.Much appreciated.
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 7:03:00 PM

    well written and easy to read sonnet. Great writing... Jake

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/7/2013 7:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you my friend.So much appreciated.
  1. Date: 6/18/2013 7:55:00 PM

    Mustapha, This is a great poem, I was truly inspired reciting it out loud, thank you for the read!

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 7/27/2013 4:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind comment Hakim.
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 8:43:00 AM

    Welcome on board bro. Well done and congrats on your great lovely strike.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 7/27/2013 4:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Abdulhafeez for your kind welcome.
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 5:30:00 PM

    Mustapha, How are you this lovely evening? :-) Congratulations with having your awesome poem featured on the soups home page.... sending hugs. Hope you are enjoying this day with your family. always & forever *LINDA

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 7/27/2013 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Linda,sending hugs to you also.
  1. Date: 6/10/2013 7:09:00 PM

    I loved your words, Mustapha, I wish I had your way with words. thank you for sharing

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 7/27/2013 5:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Peter for that touching comment.
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 7:46:00 PM

    a beautiful moon under the passing of the shadows. and I to would gaze the nights a thousand moons, if ever was nothing but dark... M M., I love this poem very much. Adding this poem among to my favorite list. always~ LINDA

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 7/27/2013 4:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda for commenting so kindly.xoxo
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 4:12:00 AM

    Mustapha, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 5/27/2013 8:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise for your kind welcome.It will be a pleasure to share some of my work with you guys here.You have a great day also and i will check out your stuff.
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 9:15:00 PM

    Dearest M.M welcome to Poetry Soup love your poem as beautiful as everything you write. again welcome Linda

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 5/27/2013 8:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Linda thanks for inviting me here,I'm still trying to find my way around this site.Thanks again dearest friend.
  1. Date: 5/25/2013 12:06:00 PM

    Mustapha, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed Date: 5/27/2013 7:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Skat,there are so many poets here i feel a bit odd fitting in here.That my poems might somehow get lost.I'm an accomplished writer from Connectingsingles.com,i currently have over 600 poems there.I will share some of my romantic poems and others with you and i will check out your work,but as it stands i dont have friends here except Linda Hamilton.Thanks alot for the welcome my dear.