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  1. Date: 6/22/2013 9:01:00 AM
    Congratulations, this is a well deserved placement. Hugs Rick

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:54:00 PM
    Nice and complete, congrats on your big win Nette xxx

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 1:26:00 PM
    You are amazing .......especially when the first part was written in less than 5 minutes!! This is incredible....I bow in your honor!!

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 1:08:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS in Russell's contest.... Luv~ SKAT

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 7:46:00 AM
    It seems you can pull beautiful phrases right out of the air Nette. Congratulations on your no. 1. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 2:23:00 AM
    Congratulations Nette on your fine win. A fabulous poem. Connie

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 7:14:00 AM
    Wonderful, hopeful, uplifting!

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 12:31:00 PM
    Reminding sweet sun day. Last two lines are amazing depicting the whole. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 3:17:00 PM
    wow, just beautiful, Nette

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Taken aback by your exhales. This, of course, is nothing new. :) I am all for the lyrics of Saturday's song.

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 7:12:00 AM
    what a lovely imagery here and feel the tranquility in your heart... have a good day!---Elai

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 12:21:00 AM
    Great metaphors and contrast between the wiles of Saturday and the worship on Sunday. I am amazed how jam packed this was with descriptions... where poetry excels... awesome!

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:14:00 PM
    As incredible and as moving as always... your use of thorns was bang on, bringing it back to Christianity's origins... did you intend the 24 lines (24 hours in the day) or did it just work out that way? Such a STRONG write... hugs... Cyndi

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:31:00 PM
    This feels holy.....I feel blessed again by your poem...thank you

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 6:45:00 PM
    I can't wait for Sunday to come after reading this very beautiful and outstanding poem of yours my very dear friend, Nette! You did it extraordinarily well. If this is for the contest, a grand winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing and your kind visit the other day with your sweet congratulatory comments. Many big heartfelt congrats on your many fabulous wins recently as well! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 4:30:00 PM
    Ahhhh I feel refreshed.

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 4:18:00 PM
    A feast of delightful feelings orchestrated by the divine! Thank you!

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 3:29:00 PM
    For each and every Sunday that presents itself like this is truly a glorious Sunday to bestow my friend! You have so illustriously written a tremendous poem here Nette, I really loved reading this quite enjoyable piece this evening! What a positively luminous poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 2:44:00 PM
    very charming and brimming with pretty images,Nette. ME LIKES.

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 1:23:00 PM
    - Thanks for letting us have one Sunday ..... would like to have two! Beautiful poem, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)