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I am listening your whisper

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I am listening your whisper

Listening, I’m listening carefully
  A secret is whispering in my heart
        What you’re trying to tell me my love,
I’m listening, your whisper in my heart

I hear footsteps even from a distance
   I know it is yours when they are getting nearer
        I smell your scent even from far
 I feel your presence even before you get closer my reach

I touch my face when I smile
  To teach my fingers to see like eyes
        When I touch your face they tell me how 
You are radiantly smiling, when I sing to you

You pick a flower and say it is a jasmine
   And put it on my long hair
         And call me “my white jasmine” 
Hug  me and  shower with your passionate kisses 

You cuddle me sometime and recite
    Dorothea Mackellar's“ Colours of light” 
        Or de la mare’s “Silver”, my favorite.
Though beauty of colours I cannot see, 
 I feel them through your musical stream

All these days I misjudge my God, but
    When I feel your deep love, I know
        The God truly loves me, I feel it too.
Both I cannot see but only how my heart feels

World is a beautiful place you say 
           I do not need eyes of my own to see
             I will see everything through yours, My love
Colours of love in this whole universe

Every moment I dream your touch and your smell
         A secret is whispering in my heart

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  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:12:00 AM

    Excellent. Gorgeous piece of writing. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake Date: 6/25/2013 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you my dearest Friend.
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:31:00 AM

    An ecstatic and euphoric melody of the heart, a hymn to love! A 7! Thank you for the visit. Please, read my REINCARNATION and my CREATION, when you have time!

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake Date: 6/25/2013 8:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Late rep;y. Sorry! I was not well. Thank you my dearest! i will read your Reincarnation and Creation. Hugs and Lots of Love
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 6:44:00 AM

    This is a gorgeous piece, I am colored blind yet I feel the beautiful colors of your soul.

    gunatillake Avatar manel gunatillake Date: 5/23/2013 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Soooo much Richard,
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/23/2013 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Also thank you for your thoughtful visits and comments.