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Bliss

Into her bliss

…

I dandle her palms
Soft whispers of song
Between fingers’ hope

Each breath she emanates
Slows down nocturnal seconds

Crawl

Her alluring curvature
Making sunsets halt to take notice

Sway

Under our wings
We will transcend mahogany raptures

Stained glass streaks in carnal auroras
Beaming sultry appetites for cerebellum unison

Taste

Her lilac scented release

Sanctified eyelids
Gripping unto wanton’s edge

Muscle reflex
Reflects hunger amongst sapphire wishes

Hold

Cloud 9’s mattress
Inside
Redemption of our masses

Inches closer to epicurean epiphanies

Don’t
Let
Go

©Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 10/4/2013 6:54:00 PM
    Drake....excellent piece of writing! You're very talented! Julie :-)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 10/5/2013 8:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you, Julie! =D You're very kind to say that.
  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:56:00 AM
    I read this one again and posted a comment....Deleted it, and now I'm posting another one! ;) Silly me!! This left me breathless...ABSOLUTELY ASTOUNDING, Drake....You are dangerous with words....This write has so many of my favorite things...No, ha ha...Not going to go into the Sound of Music Rendition. Hey...Post something, will ya????!!!!! Am I starting to nag or what???? ;) I know I'm not the only one!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 9/11/2013 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tomorrow, I will. ;-) And THANK YOU for not going into a Sound of Music rendition...I hadn't had my lunch yet. lol You rock, Eileen! =D
  1. Date: 8/7/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Whoa!i was actually bought into this poem!wow i mean i had a mental glance into this piece!keep writing great job!loving it

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/7/2013 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's awesome! I love when my readers fall deep into the setting of my lines. That means a lot. Thank you so much, April!
  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:14:00 AM
    Excellent beauty adorned with very sweet words, my friend. I have read thrice to feel it. Lovely done. Loved always, bl

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 7/15/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wonderful, BL! Thank you so very much!
  1. Date: 6/9/2013 1:26:00 AM
    Your words are always so often easy to lose myself in. Could 9's mattress seems swell to me :)... you do like playing around with that metaphor don't you? Cloud 9. I hope I don't come off as being "overtly complimentary". Your work truly DOES move me, and my main goal when commenting is to be as honest as I can. Keep it up!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 6/9/2013 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The day I complain about getting too many "compliments", is the day my heart grows cold. No way will I ever have a problem with that. Yeah, I have a thing for Cloud 9 and its significance. Thanks so very much, Tim. :)
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 2:47:00 AM
    This is an amazing poem i'll read more of ur work :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/30/2013 7:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Maria!!! How awesome of you! Don't let me stop you. :) Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 1:20:00 PM
    this is nice SandyIvy

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/27/2013 1:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, Sandy. Thanks very much for stopping by here!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:58:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this very sensual expressive work..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/24/2013 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much, Sara! :)
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:37:00 PM
    How absolutely breathtaking is this! I won't write more cause words fail me. To my favs.... 7

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/24/2013 2:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WOO HOO! Leaving a poet speechless, WIN! :) Thank you so much, Eileen!
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 6:34:00 AM
    You have such a brilliant way with expressive words. Well written poem on an intimate topic.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/24/2013 6:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, the intimacy is very important without it getting all dirty & strange. :) Thanks so much, Kim!
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:56:00 PM
    A most exotic and sensually appealing poem. Your captivating style " knocked my socks off". Excellent :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/23/2013 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OMG, are your socks ok? ;) Thank you very, very much, Karen!
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Into her bliss crawl sway taste hold don't let go..I ll keep on reading and i can feel all your muse senses coming through in deep emotion.I logged in for a few moments just to give a look at some poems here and then comment tomorrow..but for just one poem even if my lashes are flutterin and my eyes are soon closinf..One comment can still do.Hopefully my muse will return and hoping i have time to read more of these beauties and others 'souoers too.:)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/23/2013 4:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Why are you so awesome? I hope you rest well tonight. I am very grateful for you commenting when youre all tired. :) Thank you so very much, Charmaine!!!
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 12:14:00 PM
    - Drake, I'm a huge admirer - you have completely "your own" style! - Love it!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/23/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is very awesome of you to say! I do what I can here to stand out effectively. :) Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 4:25:00 PM
    hmmm....a very sultry one here, Drake! Awesome with sensuality. I always love the powerful lines you place at the ending. Totally awesome! hugs, Catie :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/22/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    WOO HOO! Thank you, Catie! :) I realized I haven't written this kind of piece in a long while. So, this was a tad overdue. :)
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 12:36:00 PM
    the nagger in me is waiting for your next masterpiece, lol... tke yout tme; you have 30 minutes!..:) huggs, dear friend.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/22/2013 12:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HAHAHAHHA! I just posted this yesterday! You're are just too much! :)
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 11:33:00 AM
    Just love it Drake, poems within poems!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/22/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Heh! I can dig it. Thanks Richard! :)
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 11:15:00 AM
    Wow, Drake. I will read many more than this one. Thank you for commenting on my poem about my brother. I just posted a new one, which you might like. Fondly fellow poet -Nola Perez

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/22/2013 11:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey there, Nola! :) Thank you for stopping by here. Of course, I will keep reading your work!
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 12:55:00 AM
    very pretty enjoyed reading your work

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/22/2013 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is much appreciated. Thank you!
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 3:18:00 PM
    Oh I won't Drake, not in a million years, Love to read your poetry, it's scented with romance and a great big bouquet of sensitivity, hugs xxx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/21/2013 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hee hee. That's too cute. Thank you so much, rose. :)
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 2:13:00 PM
    Excellent work poet

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 5/21/2013 2:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks, Sean!
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