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  1. Date: 6/13/2013 3:26:00 PM

    Great winning work..I am glad that I found this one and read it today..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 9:52:00 AM

    This one hit home! I love it....congratulations on this superb poem...

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 11:13:00 AM

    Perhaps my favorite here--another gem Nette! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:55:00 PM

    I remember this one and how I really liked it the first time as well. Congrats on the winner's list, Nette.

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:43:00 PM

    nice win

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:39:00 PM

    Nette, intense emotion on this senryu, congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 7:08:00 PM

    Congratulations, nette, point well-made with great juxtaposition...rage and tame. Gives a whole new meaning to rage without a recipient., what a waste! I'd have placed this one closer to the top. This might be closer really to haiku.

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 3:37:00 PM

    Congrats on your win with this beautiful piece of writing. Rick

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:44:00 AM

    Wish you congratulation in this contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:04:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning place nette xx

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 6:20:00 PM

    I love to deal with a situation first by myself, alone. After rolling it around in my mind, only then can I share my feelings/emotions. I can relate to this wonderful senryu. Nicely done Nette. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 12:23:00 AM

    Powerful! Sometimes we just need to walk it off and take a good long time with ourselves before speaking up again. The ocean was great for this because it can be very angry as well as very peaceful (the ocean is most unpredictable).

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 6:20:00 AM

    Interesting jux here with temper building but with the antagonist not there anger subsides.

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 4:52:00 PM

    GORGEOUS... oh, Nette, this one smokes... such a beautiful sting to the eyes! Verity is now officially four and we've been partying for FIVE DAYS. LOL... I'll never top this next year! Hope you are well... will catch up with your "gemstones" tonight, before I write another word. Love, Cyndi

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:47:00 PM

    I really like this, Nette. You could have used so many verbs in that last part also. Soothes, calms, but tames is a very interesting choice I think to go with a different kind of idea!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 6:54:00 PM

    Outstanding Poem Poer. Loved it!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 4:48:00 PM

    As solitude tames, an ocean of thoughts spill over her page, and we take our fill, Thank you Nette, for your poetry xxx

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 3:52:00 PM

    Love the depth in this Senryu Nette.Very Nice!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 3:08:00 PM

    You have created a wonderful and enlightening write my friend! Wow this poem explains so clearly how solitude will work in regards to this rage and respective ocean's fathomless pit...I had to almost quote your poem completely as it is told so perfectly with the fewest words possible Nette! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:45:00 PM

    Very wise senryu enjoyed. Thanks.......,a lot. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:13:00 PM

    So young, so passionate, so wise! Perfect! 7!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:06:00 AM

    Yes. The power of breathing deep when standing at the borderline of madness. Fantastic.

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:54:00 AM

    Good one, Nette !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)