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strange lives on line

 
Still rainbow stands in air this morn; 
the distant garden blooms adorn, 
like promised end to approach near, 
surreal nostalgies appear.

So dream and dream wraiths of their stare, 
amid sea waves and black rocks' fare, 
expending were they - strangers born, 
on sepia stills and pictures torn.

Up in the clouds, where wounds don't hurt, 
their tears become the rain's first flirt; 
and meet with drops' communion wine, 
deep sorrow brusque - strange lives on line.

How beautiful's this flow of streams
when dancers love and send pure dreams
where silver wraiths of their eighteen
meet roses blooms' homecoming queen.

On iridescent days and glow
next to the stream where fair dreams flow,
regales old promise to relive
and twinkling is her smile of grief.

Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
Contest Name:	 PD poems (Dedicated to PD)
Placement: 1st

© 05-21-2013, G. V., All Rights Reserved
 


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  1. Date: 6/16/2013 12:13:00 PM

    this is a beautiful tribute for her, Giorgio. congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 2:48:00 AM

    Congratulations Giorgio xx

  1. Date: 6/16/2013 12:51:00 AM

    This is so lovely & excellent poem for our very dear favorite poet & friend Linda. My heartfelt congratulations on your great win my dear friend Giorgio! Thanks for sharing your awesome write as well & belated thanks for your inspiring comments on my poem. Have a great weekend! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 5:20:00 PM

    On iridescent days and glow next to the stream where fair dreams flow, I love these lines. You have such a beautiful way with words. SuZ

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 8:30:00 AM

    love it particularly the fourth stanza it sums up this poem perfectly. A dreamy element which takes the reader along with you finely penned

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 2:36:00 AM

    - A really beautiful poem Giorgio, allowing the reader to dream far away ..... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 6:28:00 PM

    You are a master of metaphor...enjoyed this immensely. What we see is not always what we get on line. Great title for this amazing poem :)

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    Date: 5/21/2013 2:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karen. :)