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Voices

                                                    I's walking alone
                                         Near down the stream of silence
                                                    Called my spirit

                                              "Ssshhh" calm blow of air
                                             Embracing my warm body
                                                     Uplift my spirit

                                                   "Ribbit, Ribbit" Oh!
                                          The amazing chants of frogs
                                                  Flattering my heart

                                                "Buzzzzz" the busy bees
                                         Dancing whilst butts were working
                                             Ouch! sweet kiss you shared

                                              "Tweet" the lovely birds!
                                           Circling around the bright sun
                                                 What a wonderful!

                                                 "Tik" ...can't identify
                                           There's moving under my feet
                                                   Alas! pygmy prey! 

                                                Can't count what I hear
                                           Wake up my dear sleeping soul
                                                Give one chance to live

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  1. Date: 9/27/2013 10:35:00 PM
    This is a nice write full of imagery and creativity. You take the reader on a nature journey full of life and wonderment. nice job

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 11:07:00 AM
    This is very beautiful Elai. Well done on your brilliant quill. AO

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 6/1/2013 8:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks OA
  1. Date: 5/28/2013 12:14:00 PM
    I enjoyed your inclusion of sounds here Elai--- so many beautiful sounds from nature if we only stop and listen... very nice. Thanks as well for passing by my poem

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/29/2013 1:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you... P.Ink
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 10:34:00 AM
    Beautiful picture worded in to sweet haiku. It's called genius presentation. Thanks......,loved always, bl

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/26/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank u BL
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 9:11:00 AM
    Having written a few haiku poems, I can appreciate what you have accomplished here. You have forged this form into the smoothest haiku I have seen in a long while. Great job.... Jake

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/26/2013 9:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thaks dear John... i make all ur comments as an inspiration to enhance more my writings. God bless u!
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 2:50:00 PM
    lovely

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/22/2013 6:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Claiborne
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 10:55:00 PM
    Enyoyed reading your Haiku venture here Elai I see Lots of potential in your work hope to see more of your stuff..'

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/22/2013 6:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joe... this can really help to see ur comment
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 12:53:00 PM
    The tone of this piece floats in a charming way!.. winner... :) huggs

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/22/2013 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks net... u'r wonderful..
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:44:00 AM
    Hi Elai, reformation of the soul. I like it!!! I like the first haiku. the imagery of walking alone, in silence,,, then that's when all the voices start.... good with the tik, tweet, and buzzing sound... enjoyed~ Linda

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/22/2013 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Miss u Linda... thank you, you are truly awesome in my heart...
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:24:00 AM
    The inner whispers longing for your voice. Incredible.

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/22/2013 6:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Drake
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Divine whispers to an awaiting for enlightenment soul!

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/20/2013 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for visiting me here... flattered by your comment.
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:50:00 AM
    Very Very wonderful Here is the point of God speaking through you as David said in Psalms "I lift up my soul to you Lord" this is a very very wonderful wording for todays poeple God bless and keep writing

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/20/2013 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Samuel. I know He made it all for us. I read the book of psalms and i have seen how beautiful and good is God! miss your comment.
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 4:00:00 AM
    Hi Elai!! I truly love the imagery in this very well written set of haiku`s.Awesome work my friend! Hugs,Arild

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/20/2013 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Aldrid! I miss your comment!
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 2:50:00 AM
    I decided to enter this in SOUND's competition under by Frank H.---so excited whether i will win or not. It's an honor to be part of it! high kick!!!---ELAI