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Haiku 51

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Haiku 51

	
	
	locomotive roar
	tornado’s deadly path
	Oklahoma Spring


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  1. Date: 7/24/2013 3:14:00 PM

    those poor okies!! That is great how you could get a haiku like this from the situation though.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 7/24/2013 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I live ten miles south of where it happened, and was in a storm shelter, watching the news on my cell phone. It made quite an impact on everyone around here, and the area is far from being restored.
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 11:13:00 PM

    I will say, a very well written haiku that puts me right in the mood of the situation... I'm only sad for the inspiration behind it.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 5/23/2013 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks. It's very real and very sad, and I'm only glad it didn't happen to my family.
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 4:11:00 AM

    - I am glad that we never had tornado in Norway - terrible destruction - Well done haiku Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 5/20/2013 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks... There's more to come this afternoon. Jack