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Where The Wind Blows

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Where The Wind Blows

When Mother Earth speaks to Father Sky
She gently lets out a whisper sigh

A gentle breeze to send her kisses
Across the blue, she sends her wishes

Father Sky, please send gentle rain
To feed our children once again

She blows a kiss in perfect time
To free the sun again to shine

Then blows her petals across open meadows
Before moon overtakes sun's evening shadows

Now she sleeps, where none will know
Exactly where her wind doth blow....

Tomorrow she'll rise to speak to Father Sky
Of secrets shared upon winds lullaby

©Donna Jones

©Donna Jones

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  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:45:00 PM
    A great write Donna, a worthy win you have penned here...peter

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 3:03:00 PM
    Just beautiful! I loved the flow of the words with the rhyme scheme. And the imagery is amazing! Very nicely done, Donna!...Thank you for the kind comments. It means a lot to me!

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 8:28:00 PM
    I love Indian legends. Very nice to read this in poetry. :)

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 12:16:00 PM
    congrats on your win with this lobely write Donna...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/9/2013 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph...
  1. Date: 6/7/2013 9:54:00 AM
    Good morning Donna, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) this is a very pleasing poem... glad to see it on Gail's winning list.. xox~Linda

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/9/2013 8:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda...:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
  1. Date: 6/4/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Hi Donna, congratulations, enjoyed so much reading your poem. Haven't see you in a long time, just hope you are ok. Terry

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/9/2013 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Terry....very much...am OK...:-)
  1. Date: 5/31/2013 8:58:00 PM
    Awesome Im deep in myths kinda like the trickster they called the Cayote. The blood is strong.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 6/9/2013 8:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Timothy.....cool...
  1. Date: 5/30/2013 6:23:00 AM
    I am a big fan of "Where The Wind Blows", awesome poem Donna.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/30/2013 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Appreciate it Douglas
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 9:07:00 AM
    A wonderful write and flowed as smooth as a gentle stream in spring. Thank you for your beautiful words.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/30/2013 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 7:18:00 PM
    My sweet MD! The feel of nature that you brought to life was simply enchanting. :) I think this should be there on the winner's list for sure. A 7 from me and to my favs! Absolutely wonderful work!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/30/2013 7:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you sweetie.....:-)
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 5:11:00 PM
    Enjoyed the educational add on..I am glad that I chose this work to read today..Thanks for your visit to my work..Your comments are very uplifting..Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/30/2013 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sara
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Beautiful interpretation of the spiritual Indian lore. They weave wisdom into their myths which lends an eternal charm to them..... Nice job.... Hugs to ya.... Jake

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/21/2013 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jake...
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:12:00 AM
    like a flowing breath of freshness in the air with wonderful mythical tinges that simply entice...uniquely superb, donna..:) huggles

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/21/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind visit nette ..
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 10:16:00 PM
    Thanks for the bit of education in the end... I find native American myths and legends fascinating... did you know dogs with multi-colored eyes were called Spirit Dogs, and we're believed to protect you from bad spirits? Concerning the poem I really enjoyed it. Especially the ominous quality of the Mother Earth sleeping where none will know...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/21/2013 6:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Timothy....I don't know all the accepted theories of this myth, but thought it a nice subject for a poem...and I've seen this breed of dog...I forget the name...they are a type of heeler I think and very smart!...and yes protective....my uncle when alive usually kept one of these....
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 3:09:00 PM
    this is simply beautiful and one of the best I've seen for the wind contest! LUv, Andrea

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/21/2013 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea...had a few minutes early today...to say hi and thanks' looks stormy again...I live not far from the last two days devastated areas, those poor people..
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:02:00 AM
    Amazing! I love where you own win blow. Very impressive and well written. It will definately do well in the contest. Great job! AO

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/21/2013 6:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I appreciate the kind words AO...:-) and support
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:45:00 AM
    The wind blows and the sky snows. The 1st of May, MY GOD, who knows. The trees do bend. Power lines snap. The morning after looks just like .... . But when the sun warms up the earth. What's still standing shows amazing rebirth.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:14:00 AM
    Tremendous setting here. "Blows a kiss in perfect time", I dig that line.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/21/2013 10:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Drake....thanks!
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:48:00 AM
    Love this, Donna!! It's a fave!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/21/2013 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You made my day Caleb...thanks..hope the storms missed you guys...they were too close for comfort here...in OK
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 7:03:00 AM
    - Thank you - it's a lovely poem Donna! - Luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones
    Date: 5/21/2013 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Anne Lise
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