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10 Minutes to Decide

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10 Minutes to Decide

With his back turned he looks away from her He depends on his trusty watch and waits Her response will be today, he knows it He hears them talk behind him, which abates What did she say, what was her sure answer His friend said that you may now turn around He begins to turn then she says no wait And back to their discussion they went down Minutes went by then it came upon ten He said he’ll turn around now and visit The women stopped their chatter together And he turned, what’s her answer, what is it?
Russell Sivey Contest: George Dunlop Leslie Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst 5/19/2013

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  1. Date: 2/23/2014 10:28:00 PM

    What answers reply my friend did this the lady give, you leave us in a frozen wonderment for the answer here. Nice way to leave it for a sequel here, cheri

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 1:12:00 PM

    interesting one must say! Congrats ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 4:36:00 PM

    Congratulations on your wonderful poem. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:22:00 AM

    Congratulations Russell i did this one too so this paints it fully for me, love it xx

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 12:30:00 AM

    I see you like the cliffhangers (do you take pleasure in leaving us hanging, huh?). Lol... good work on the mystery elements. I suppose it depends on who reads it, but I feel like it's some sort of romantic proposition... could really be anything though... cool and unique piece!

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 2:29:00 PM

    A very intriguing write leaving the reader wondering! Beautiful plot and expression!

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 12:28:00 PM

    Leaving the viewer to wonder the answer. I admire your imagination and originality. The art with in the poem. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:21:00 AM

    clever write here, my friend. Thanks - enjoyed your contest

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:04:00 AM

    I enjoyed this Russell, it sounds like an interesting formxxx

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 7:27:00 AM

    Very mysterious work..Well what was the answer?...Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments made my day..Sara

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:17:00 AM

    A perfect & the best painting I can see through your outstanding quatrain my very dear friend, Russell! You're highly imaginative and creative with your very beautiful words in your writes. Hand salute always to you my fav. poet! Thank you so much for giving me more inspirations through your stellar writes and inspiring comments. More blessings and power to you always. By the way, Big congrats to your recent big wins! love lots, Leonora