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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 3:38:00 PM
    I noticed, so many of the wins, are from my contest... Contest don't lie.. I don't care what the haters say around here... Linda

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:04:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. A touching tribute to your grandmother. The love shines through

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 8:44:00 PM
    Hi Yasmin, a nice winning poem. *Congratulations in Constance "Melancholy Memory" contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 12:28:00 PM
    Congrats on your well deserved placement. AO

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 7:19:00 PM
    Yasmin congratulations on your brilliant win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 4:45:00 PM
    Very sad and I feel fro that ten year old. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 2:00:00 PM
    This tender memory and loss, is so like my own experience.....I could feel every emotion. Lovely piece, Yasmin!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 12:46:00 PM
    I can feel the sorrow of you loss. Congratulations on your fine winning poem. SuZ

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Yasmin, congratulations on 1st place in my Melancholy Memory Contest, your poem was so emotional and deep, it was everything I asked for, well done, constance

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:07:00 PM
    i feel the emotions here---well done---elai

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 2:02:00 PM
    You've crafted it well. Many blessings to her in her grave. Very well written. Well done Yasmin and good luck in the contest. AO

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:35:00 AM
    you've certainly created a melancholy mood in this poem - well done!

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 4:26:00 AM
    so poignant it hits me right here as i celebrate my dad's birthday.. i miss my him so... hope you are well, mareeey... priya bows to this beauitful verse..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 4:26:00 AM
    Time heals... and the memories live on! Beautiful words... Terry

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 3:52:00 AM
    My dear Yasmin, probably it will comfort you to know that your grandmother is at another place but not dead! You are just separated for the time being! I know for I lost my FATHER when I was ten and my MOTHER when I was fourteen! I understand your pain but she lives on! Wonderful writing!

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 3:45:00 AM
    Wow, I have to say it again, WOW! You have written a very emotional write, one of tremendous pain and loss of a dear loved one, your grandma! What a terrible loss and at such a young age, you had to face the nature of life and death at such an early stage of life! I am sorry that you lost you grandmother then, I know that tore you apart, I was lucky I was 36 when I lost my first grandparent! I had many years to be with him! This poem made me cherish him all the more! Such a sad poem! Great Work!