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Where The Wind Blows

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Below is the poem entitled Where The Wind Blows which was written by poet Therese Bacha. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Where The Wind Blows

                                  ~Afraid With No Light~

            When I was careless not to withdraw & decided to stay 
                    laying on my back with a low vision today
                    I got so lonely watching the stars fade away
                        & the rising moon took no time to stay
                          to shed a light upon my window bay.
                        Abruptly the wind blew my spirit away
                            during that lightless night of May.
                              
               Here Is Where The Wind Blew My Spirit & Soul Away. 
                                          
                     Thats when I screamed let me die or cry
                      let me sleep so deep not to feel I need 
                          to kneel like a slave to feel safe
                              for just a brink of a light
                             to not disappear out of sight.
                          Afraid I am with no light tonight
                       thats when my wisdom flew out of sight.                              
                       Abruptly the wind stole my soul away
                          during that lightless night of May
                       leaving my body lifeless with no delay.      
                                    Anyone, Help Me.

Therese Bacha
  17/5/2013  
Contest; Gail Boyle.......Where the wind blows

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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 1:39:00 PM
    Awesome,,, you have a way with your words xxxx ;}

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 7/12/2013 9:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Debbie, sorry I was out for a while, thank yo so much for passing by, Its so nice of you. Terry xo
  1. Date: 6/8/2013 10:12:00 AM
    Hello T..:-) I am finally back on line until the next storm decides to brew in Oklahoma! I wanted to congratulate the winners of this contest...have a great rest of the weekend

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 9:53:00 AM
    Good morning Terry, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) this is a very pleasing poem... glad to see it on Gail's winning list.. xox~Linda

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 6/7/2013 9:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello my dearest friend Linda. Thank you so much, as usual, I love when you pass by and leave your sharing feelings. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/24/2013 3:38:00 PM
    I can hear a cry for help..So emotional it blown me away within your wind.Take care sweet lady.I will be back to read more of your enchantnents.

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/24/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Charmaine, no I am fine, it was only one day. Hello to princess. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:09:00 AM
    Wow very deep and very good Terry xx

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/21/2013 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Mandy, I am glad you are back. Thank you so much for your sharing. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 2:35:00 PM
    Hi, sweetheart, this fine poem is reason enough that I did not enter... Sounds like a winner to me.... Love ya..... Jake

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/20/2013 2:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi John, thank you for that huge compliment coming from you, I am honored. See u soon. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:43:00 AM
    - Terry my friend ..... so much deep feelings. - Touching reading - a very well written poem!! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/20/2013 8:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Anne, I hope you had a nice vacation. Thank for commenting so nicely on my poems, i feel good reading your sharing. Have a great holiday. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 3:50:00 AM
    ole spirit returns , with a bit of a jerk, after your spirit returns to smirk, great verse here babe today....

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/20/2013 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi my handsome friend, thank you so much. Hope u are fine. Love T.
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:33:00 PM
    Gosh, I really like how you did your wind poem, with so much emotion, sweetie. The lines about the wind stealing your soul away were outstanding. I give a highest rating!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/20/2013 8:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea, Thank you so much, see u later. Love T.xoxo
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 3:07:00 PM
    Very emotive and expressive work that you have penned for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/18/2013 3:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    As usual my friend Sara, thank you so much, I am starting to be convinced that i can write short poems. Take care Love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 7:37:00 AM
    Oh T...sigh....helping all I can....when I'm in this place I hug my dog who licks my face and wakes me up! Joy always follows sorrow and is all the sweeter...you are loved..hugs...

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/18/2013 10:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Donna, I loved my new initials, T..... thats how maybe i will start signing. Always you my true friend passes by me, and rejoices my soul with a hug. Thank you Love T. xoxo
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 4:33:00 AM
    My dearest, dearest Therese, the pain is intense, loneliness probably stronger but the light you are seeking there it is at the door, waiting to let it in into your beautiful soul! Your poem is fantastic and I give you High marks for that plus my love! Thank you!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/18/2013 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes my best friend Demetrious, you send me the light at my door, i will open and let in. Your sharing words wipe away my loneliness. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 10:01:00 PM
    loneliness is well expressed. profound thinking beautifully versed. Congratulations Love manel

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/17/2013 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    So nice of you to drop by, i really do appreciate it a lot. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 7:49:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest. Rick

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/17/2013 8:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Terry xo
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 5:23:00 PM
    This is a very deep and intriguing write my friend! I love how you write your poems staggering like that across the page...then start it up again for the next stanza! You have masterminded a wondrous piece here Therese! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/17/2013 5:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Here comes my very best friend Russell, my dear, thank you so much for giving me always the courage to keep going. I am blessed to have you as my friend. Love Terry xoxo