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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 11:18:00 PM
    This is an awesome write! Good job!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/21/2013 11:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jordan! :)
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 12:13:00 AM
    this is a really cute surprise of a poem. I Like it MUCHO. I too had a similar BEE experience as a child. HOpe it won the contest. Luv, Andrea

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/18/2013 12:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was too late to enter into it... but it was fun nonetheless! I have an irrational fears of bees and I wanted to put into words in a very lighthearted manner... a bit Dr. Seuss-ish I know... but what do you do? Thanks for reading me tonight :)
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 9:21:00 AM
    Haha! Cute! And a lesson well learned: Stay away from bees! lol!

    Buil Avatar Caleah Buil
    Date: 5/24/2013 9:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol! I may be half Cuban but I have NO IDEA what you just said. No habla Espanol??
    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/17/2013 3:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bees es no bueno! Si? Lol...
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 8:21:00 AM
    Love it!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/17/2013 3:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And I love to see you check out my work... :)
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 8:07:00 AM
    You got your butt tore up by some bees is what I think...haha. Enjoyed this very much, Timothy!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/17/2013 3:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol, Caleb! Well I have an irrational fear of bees (I honestly don't know why... their stinging doesn't hurt all that bad)... but they are the only insect that makes me jump like a little school girl... haha.
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 8:03:00 AM
    This was a very catchy piece. Quite the ride.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/17/2013 2:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! It was extremely kid-friendly (to the extreme)... not what I usually write, but I'm happy it came out like it did... you are very kind!