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CHERISHED

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CHERISHED

Perhaps when the last rose has sailed away
And I stand here alone on twilight's plea,
I will remember each and every day
When gentle hands kissed fears so tenderly.

I cherished our seasons through pain or shine
You opened love’s vessel to catch dawn’s tide ,
More than a twin soul, a gift of lifetime
Until night cuddled wisps of your last glide.

A thankful song brings memories’ relief
Asking not what true dreams are all about,
So sing with angels and take flight so brief
And will my wings to climb without a doubt.

This breath now calm above waiting lagoon
A journey far where your face lights the moon.




F.J. Thomas' Contest: Make Me Feel You
by nette onclaud



 

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  1. Date: 5/24/2013 7:23:00 PM

    I praise you on your originality. Nicely done Nette. Congratulations! Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:57:00 PM

    Congrats Nette... xool winning poem... PD

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 10:21:00 PM

    Soo happy to read this once again and saw it in the winning list my dear friend Nette! Big congratulations on your super win and outstanding piece! So proud of you my very dear friend!!! Have a great day & tcare! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 7:45:00 PM

    This makes me breathless once again....a true beauty...:)

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 9:28:00 PM

    OMG! And I never say OMG... that last line... oh, Nette, that last line.... the entire sonnet is wonderful, its just how you ended it stole my breath away. Cher, I'm so glad I stopped by for just one more. Into my faves this goes. I see your heartprints all over it ....

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:39:00 AM

    This is a perfect poem for the theme my dear friend Nette. Sooo love it. A great, lovely and tender feeling on it. I'm faving it. Thank you so much & your kind visit on my poem. I hope you will go and read my blog. Have a blessed Sunday and hope we've an optimum weather there. God bless! love and big big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:32:00 AM

    Excellent beauty is seen in this poem. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 11:44:00 AM

    An amazing poem here Nette.Such a tender write.Love this.

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 8:28:00 AM

    Embracing the horizons, holding hands with the winds. No focus on "dreams", but what is in front of them. Very deeply stated here.

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 5:20:00 AM

    Ahhh!! Great work that expresses such tender emotion..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 4:20:00 AM

    A very romantic poem with a plethora of feelings floating above the heart and mind! Beautifully done Nette!

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 3:50:00 AM

    - This is just absolutely gorgeous sweet Nette !!!!- (no contest?....lol) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 8:04:00 PM

    My sweet Nette, you have the heart of an angel, I always enjoy reading your poetry, I haven't had much time on my hands lately, sorry I haven't been reading as much of your poems but here I am take care, sending you a hug, xxx

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 7:41:00 PM

    Nette, this sounds like a lovely final goodbye to me..I so adore your style and grace.

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 6:33:00 PM

    I finished it, if you have a chance give it a read.

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 5:46:00 PM

    This has an almost eerie mood to it. I really like this form and you have done it splendidly. I am inspired to give one a go.

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 4:46:00 PM

    Oh, I truly loved this tenderly written poem my friend! My favorite line has to be, "A thankful song brings memories' relief" where I can associate myself within that line! This is a wonderful Sonnet Nette, you have brought that good feeling within my gut after I had read this incredible poem! You have written a delicate and supremely loving piece! What an awesome poem, Great Work!!