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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 5/18/2013 9:43:00 PM
    Who you are, and who you want to be, lies only in your determination to become. Go for it, you are already a great poet, and in the right place. Love T.

    Kirby Avatar Michael Kirby
    Date: 5/19/2013 10:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the encouragement Therese it really means a lot. :)
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 4:16:00 PM
    Wow, this really resonated with me. The titles in the third stanza was thought provoking. What we envision ourselves to be aren't typically very close to WHO we actually are. I also enjoyed the message in the last couple lines... there is much more to the person behind the words.

    Kirby Avatar Michael Kirby
    Date: 5/18/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your insightful comment Timothy. Just to be clear I have no aspirations to be a German dictator. Lol.
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 12:22:00 PM
    On the contrary.. you are an excellent poet.. "walking the floors" or where ever. Loved this poem.. it resonates a deep part of us all xx

    Kirby Avatar Michael Kirby
    Date: 5/16/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kim for your kind words. I wasn't sure about posting this one, entering it for a comp on youtube sometime soon. :)
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 12:18:00 PM
    A beautiful and deep poem. It really touched me.

    Kirby Avatar Michael Kirby
    Date: 5/16/2013 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much, getting in touch with the coward within myself. Or at least the shy side of myself.