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Who Do You Want me to Be

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Who Do You Want me to Be

Who do you want me to be tonight
Who do you want me to be?
A teacher, a school girl, a fairy bright
I am tired of being me

Who do you want me to be, my love
Tell me, I’m longing to know
A secretary, boss, or cleaning girl
A nymph with a shimmering glow?

Who do you want me to be, my man
I want  to play your game
A slave in your desert haram
A woman without a name

Who do you want me to be tonight
Unleash that sweet fantasy
I’ll be whoever you’re dreaming of
And guide you to ecstasy

Who do you want me to be, my love
I’ll be just who you desire
All that I know, my man, my life
Is that I long to stoke your fire!

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 8/27/2014 2:00:00 AM
    I want you, to be my Poetess, long untouched, wearing an elegant dress, perhaps red or green, lacey or with strings, plush fabric and stockings of a Queen with your hair raised up beautifully, and more floating on your neck, to be lonesome, starving for romantic lust, I want to interrupt you smoothly, as you are composing a deep love sonnet with shimmering quill in your eager hand at a desk of solid wood...Justin

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 8/27/2014 2:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What a post, Justin....Red suits my coloring...my hair up suits me as well....You are on track with most of what you write. Then...you have described me. I do love wood and antiques...and writing...thank you for reading this write. Thank you for responding as you have. It is a tribute to your wonderful and kind heart and mind...Your soul captivates. To be interrupted as I write....You must be very adept at that for writing is my passion, and hardly anything can tear me away! ;)
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 12:33:00 PM
    just wanted to add on what i said on this write maybe surgestive but also the ide very provocitive i agree dont rassion the passion some people are just boring enjoy xxx davidscott

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/16/2013 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi David! Thanks for the bit of advice there. You've made me smile. Glad we have limits on what we think we can share and not! You are wise if you think it was a bit much not to post it! :) Glad you stopped by.
  1. Date: 5/16/2013 12:30:00 PM
    I think its a sin to deny what your heart truly desiers just be your self or though I quity like the french maid or tenis player sorry like the pattern theres a coup[le ive wrote on subject but to rude to put on here xxxxdavidscott

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 8:15:00 AM
    Oooh-la-la. I bet your dad would faint on this one. lol. I LIKE I LIKE I LIKE. Seldom do you come across a poet/ess with the courage to write outside of the box. I've found one in you, but I'm doubly lucky because you also show eloquence and finesse. I don't say this lightly. You go, girlfriend!!! :-)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/16/2013 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    He sure would, Delysia! No doubt about that. I adore my Dad. We are very close. He spoiled me rotten as I was the last child and the only girl! But...I could always understand the love of God the Father because of my dad! :) Thanks for your kind words, I do treasure your friendship. You go, girlfriend!!! :) What a kick to say that!
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 6:47:00 PM
    I don't think it's too much. I can understand some might find it offensive (but that's like holding back, posting a poem about telephones and coffee machines for fear of upsetting an Amish person). What's an Amish person even DOING on poetry soup...? (after all that's electronics!)... sorry I'm in a weird mood at the moment...

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/15/2013 11:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh...thanks for the assurance. I'm a bit rebellious at heart. Comes with the territory. I was brought up in a conservative home. My father is a pastor and we had to be exemplary kids. Makeup..and revealing clothes weren't encouraged..neither was dancing...all for very good reasons that I accept, but I gave my poor dad a hard time. I still do! ;) Won't let him read this one, that's for sure! Oh well, sometimes you just have to let it all out.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 6:14:00 PM
    Now Eileen, Do you really want to know the answer to that Q lol. Coz I got lots of ideas lol. I totally agree with this write, why not be someone else now and then. Is that not better than him/her seeking that someone else? Well said my little Desert Orchid. Take care, Richard

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/15/2013 6:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Richard Richard...be good! I guess some ideas wouldn't hurt, though! Tell me what you got! Glad you liked this write.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 5:01:00 PM
    There is a perfect role you can play.. a role that fits you.. The role is Eileen.. the Super Wife.. the Talented Poetess.. the Perfect Teacher.. the Serious Student.. the cook .. the sincere .. the lovable .. the loyal .. the friend .. Eileen.. the Humanitarian Queen!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/15/2013 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I must say.....You make Eileen seem nicer than all the others! :) Guru Jad...thanks ever so much for your sweet and caring heart. You are a great and sincere friend. :) Thanks for your support and love.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 3:35:00 PM
    Oh Eileen... you and your fantasies... (haha I jest). Once again... this is years from happening to ME... but I guess you give me good ideas to spice things up in the future ;)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/15/2013 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh Timothy...I'm sure you'll have your ways to spice things up. Not everyone is the same...some think it weird, but...yes...my fantasies do have the better hand of me. This way we can life multiple lives....I'm sure some find it offensive, and I wouldn't share this with the people in my "real" world, but...here I feel comfortable. Tell me if you think it's much..and not in jest! :)
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Little role playing in the bedroom tonight?..haha...don't mind if I do! Great one!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/15/2013 1:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm naughty, Caleb... ;) Hubby likes to oblige. Adds some spice, don't you think? Oh...yes, you agree.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 11:51:00 AM
    Wonderful poem... great rhyme, great rhythym... good use of repetition... Terry

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/15/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Terry. I do like repetition of a good thing! :) Thanks for the visit.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 10:31:00 AM
    Sorry Eileen i love you as you are, dreams are for dreamers, reality is in your words those that inspire here on soup

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/15/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Harry...you are so kind to me. Thank you for being who you are.
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:39:00 AM
    This gave me goosebumps. I will go dive in a pool of cold water now. Cheers!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/15/2013 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;) Oh Drake!.....
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Just be yourself :) Great Poem though :)

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 5/15/2013 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Sasha! Yes...I guess that is the best thing in the end.