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In The Mood Haiku

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Below is the poem entitled In The Mood Haiku which was written by poet Richard Lamoureux. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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In The Mood Haiku

street lights filter in
two shadows crossing a room
rhythmic dance begins


In The Mood Contest

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  1. Date: 5/21/2013 4:26:00 PM

    Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:49:00 PM

    Shadow dancers...ummmmmm congratulations Richard

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 3:30:00 PM

    I was impressed with this the first time I read it (I would've placed it much higher) congrats :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/20/2013 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Charlotte I kinda liked this one myself.
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 2:41:00 PM

    VERY good one, Richard. glad to finally see it and on this winner's list. Congratulations.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/20/2013 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It seems we both had dancing on our minds.
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 12:46:00 PM

    congrats on your win.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/20/2013 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Colleen
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:42:00 AM

    Wish you congratulation on your win my friend. It's very nice piece. Loved always, bl

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/20/2013 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks bl
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:13:00 AM

    Congrats on your fine wine. Well done. AO

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/20/2013 2:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks A.O
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 6:03:00 AM

    How absolutely romantic and sensual. Just what she wanted.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/15/2013 6:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I can see that. Looks very playful indeed.
    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 5/15/2013 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    BTW...thanks for liking the avatar! :) I think you had mentioned this one before....Craig called it the Betty Boop look! What do you think? I kind of like that!
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Oooh I liked the image of shadows dancing... it paints a clear picture in my head. I'm told that the essence of haiku is to be objective and put the poet (so to speak) out of the poem, since haiku is about observation. You seem to have done that really well :) Just thought I'd point out there's a tiny typo in line three. It should be "rhythmic".

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/14/2013 9:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, I missed that one.
  1. Date: 5/14/2013 8:10:00 AM

    Nice one!! This Haiku sets the stage for something magical. Best wishes. Hugs and luv, Gail

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/14/2013 8:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Gail, still trying to get the hang of this form.