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Sailing

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Below is the poem entitled Sailing which was written by poet Suzanne Delaney. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Sailing

She misses the morning mist;
the deep, shadowed vista of valleys
hair flying
across her face like curtains

her papa at the helm of  ‘Atlanta’. 
passing plagues of flies
at the bridge where fishermen cleaned their catches

Each day like a page and once turned
no chance of ever re-tracing.


5/13/2013

For Russell Sivey’s  5 minute Challenge
Used the wordlist as a trigger and wrote for 5 mins.

Mist, helm, part, page, plaque, hair, traces, bridge, curtain, vista

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  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:58:00 PM
    Congratulation on a well deserved win, always enjoying your poems plus more... I like the way everyone showed off their poem in less than 5 minutes..... LINDA

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 11:16:00 AM
    A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 2:35:00 AM
    I can really see the mind flowing in this one... I felt as though it was about to really take off, but then got abruptly stopped by the time limit. Impressive work! I've never tried a word list before... maybe someday I'll try that.

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 10:58:00 PM
    oh my gosh and you used a word list too??? You are remarkable!!! (thanks for my win in your contest. It was your first contest, right?)

    Delaney Avatar Suzanne Delaney
    Date: 5/14/2013 12:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes my first Contest and I am tired so will take a break between posting another.
    Delaney Avatar Suzanne Delaney
    Date: 5/14/2013 12:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea: It takes me back to the Buzz Challenges on Kookamonga Square and the UTNE Cafe had a challenge like this where they would post the words and you had to post a poem in the 15minute time range. You get fast at putting words together. It is a good exercise really.