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Russell's 5 minutes are up

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Russell's 5 minutes are up

5 short minutes is not enough
to write a verse and make it sound
pleasing to the ear, I've found!
A little free verse will have to do,..... held together with some glue!

For Russell's contest, I will rush
but with Russell's small allotted time
I can't find the words to rhyme
Oh, look I did it!! ..see those words? 
Time and Rhyme they turned out good!  Please don't say this is absurd!

my dilemma is that clock
ticking tocking.....time is up
Gotta go now.......wish me luck!!
 


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5/13/13   4 minutes.....you can probably tell !!!!!

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  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:51:00 PM
    Congratulation on a well deserved win, Carrie always enjoying your poems... LINDA

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 12:48:00 AM
    well, this is fine and dandy in five minutes. congrats for your win and thanks for your sweet comment to me today.

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 3:46:00 PM
    Nice write, You deserve it.

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 3:06:00 PM
    Awesome! Very entertaining time! :)

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 8:02:00 PM
    Wow this s great....Seren

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 3:19:00 PM
    congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 11:13:00 AM
    A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 8:32:00 AM
    Oh look what you did!...You done gone and wrote another winner and no I caint tell nuttin neither...

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 7:14:00 AM
    I cant get up the courage to do this one. Especially after reading yours. lol. Good thinking! BG

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 1:39:00 AM
    lol. You did well in just 4 minutes, Carrie. Not for the life of me would I be able to do it. Good luck in Russel's contest, my friend. :-)

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 1:01:00 AM
    That is the first rule of writing ha ha If you can't think of something to write...write about not being able to write. Clever entry and good luck Carrie.

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 5:18:00 PM
    This is cleverly written. I enjoyed reading this. Carrie I believe this is a winner. Warm Smiles, Connie