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Terminal

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Terminal

TERMINAL – SENRYU

rather than hurt you
you must find another love,
one shall die, you live.

© Harry J Horsman 2013   

TERMINAL-TANKA

Rather than hurt you
you must find another love
one shall die, you live
please keep all the memories
my heart will never grow cold!

© Harry J Horsman 2013   

I have found i enjoy creating a Tanka out of both a Haiku and Senryu,
although the Haiku/Senryu are more precise
The Tanka is more fulfilling...posted here is my point!

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  1. Date: 6/10/2013 7:34:00 PM
    Good point, I did however enjoy both.

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:00:00 AM
    I agree Harry...I love writing both forms and often see haikus that should be senryus (Not that I'm an expert) Well done here my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 10:58:00 AM
    very awesome senryu and tanka...like it my friend Harry..have a blessed day always! :) hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 12:49:00 PM
    I like the Senryu because it stirs imagination - a double edged little piece. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 8:41:00 AM
    These are GREAT CREATIONS my dear friend Harry! Two thumbs up here! I extremely love them both! Thanks a lot for sharing your gem and your creative talents! More blessings to you. Thank you so much as well for your kind visit. Have a nice day! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 1:36:00 PM
    Senryu, tanka, haiku, nah.:) For me, they make my mind go blah. But when someone writes with such passion. It's all quite nice to be in fashion. :)

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 6:05:00 AM
    yes, the tanka is related strongly to haiku and gives us the ability to say MORE. As you have so nicely shown us here. Great seeing you this morning. I miss seeing you a lot!

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 2:51:00 AM
    Very impressive and straight to the point. Well done.

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 6:46:00 PM
    i like the way you created the tanka from both haiku and senryu. Harry, a deep message... always~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 1:08:00 PM
    Wow....

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 12:45:00 PM
    Very interesting point. You do nicely always. Thanks...........,loved always, bl