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Melancholy Memory

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Melancholy Memory

Youth from long ago Back when I was little And still in grammar school… Innocence I held puppy love I thought she was all that My whole world was for her… Gratitude Swiftly things went south Felt the pains of lost love Hurt was running rampant… Illusion Cried for many days I couldn’t digest pain I was lost within me… Destruction My heart is broken Finally I knew grief I felt it throughout me… Saddened love
Melancholy Form by Constance 5/6/6/3 X5 Contest: Melancholy Memory Sponsor: Constance La France 5/13/2013

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  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Lovely poem

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 8:47:00 PM
    Hi Russell, a nice winning poem. *Congratulations in Constance "Melancholy Memory" contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 12:39:00 PM
    Congrats on your well deserved placement. Glad to see it on the list. AO

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 7:26:00 PM
    Congratulations Russell on your fantastic win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 5:16:00 PM
    You expressed your loss beautifully. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 1:02:00 AM
    Sad indeed! Well done on working with the difficult restraints... with mine it kinda came out fragmented. These feelings of young love are bit foreign to me... still... your words are ample enough to take me the there.

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 10:38:00 PM
    Reads as if you got caught in a heartbreaker's trap. Good write as usual Russell.

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 5:22:00 PM
    Written like your still sixteen. The freshness of pain that is. :) Short on time. Bye.

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Excellent verse which extricates a feeling of melancholy. Another super winner for me my dear friend, Russell. Two thumbs up! I love and so enjoyed your writes this evening. Million thanks! Have a great day! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 7:01:00 PM
    Takes me back ... many, many years...oh that first heartbreak that a child feels so certain. Excellent write my friend !!! Reads like a winner to me !!

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 3:34:00 AM
    Well done Russell!

  1. Date: 5/14/2013 12:26:00 AM
    You have captured the real melancholy of lost love. Looks like a winner in my book. SuZ

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 1:16:00 PM
    Yes Russell. Who doesn't still feel that first lost love? Well done...

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 10:31:00 AM
    sentimental in mood with such great emotional appeal, russell,,,phrases mark the bittersweet song of young love.. remarkable, friend!

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 10:30:00 AM
    sentimental in mood with such great emotional appeal, russell,,,phrases mark the bittersweet song of young love.. remarkable, friend!

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 7:58:00 AM
    "Swiftly things went south. Felt the pains of lost love" I imagine every young person, boy or girl, felt that crushing emotion! Well written... brought a tear to my eye remembering those young days! Cheers to you my good friend!

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 7:00:00 AM
    Great work that lessens melancholy! Thank you!

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 6:55:00 AM
    I think you did really well with this challenge. A great form for you, my friend. yep, I sure do know that puppy love is sad!!

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 6:50:00 AM
    Ahhh!! Great expressive and emotive work..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit to "Cobalt Blue"...Sara

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 6:16:00 AM
    Lovely thought provoking poem-- excellent descriptive of that first love lost. In retrspect I guess we all see our innocence at what would probably best remain just a memory.

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