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DAD

This home is not a home without you...
It is silent without you...
Walls are quiet without you...
Air is still without you...
Plants are hard without you...
Mum is alone without you...
She is incomplete without you...
I am careless without you...
Bro is tensed without you...

Oh DAD!!!
            When you will be back?

We three miss you a lot...
Our life is not a life,
It's just a PAIN... WITHOUT YOU!

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  1. Date: 5/16/2013 10:51:00 AM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup... Touching write.

    Jain Avatar Cherry Jain
    Date: 5/17/2013 6:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx.. 4m my heart.. Carol
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 10:59:00 AM

    Beautiful, heartfelt poem to your father, Cherry. Well done. Licia :-)

    Jain Avatar Cherry Jain
    Date: 5/12/2013 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanx... Delysia
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 10:34:00 AM

    Lovely write, my dear! I love my father as well. I see you are new here! Hope you enjoy it! :)

    Jain Avatar Cherry Jain
    Date: 5/12/2013 10:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yup... n thanx Eileen Ghali
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 5:08:00 AM

    Such a stark, sad, and beautiful poem. You made every word count. I like that you noted the different feelings in the surroundings too. It took me back to when I was a child hoping, watching, and waiting for my father to return to the family.

    Jain Avatar Cherry Jain
    Date: 5/12/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks.. Monterey Sirak. All these are my fellings for my dad. Missing him a lot! Hope, same was with you.