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on and on

The path of success,
I never saw,
 The glass of glory,
I never tasted,
Is now fading.
I hear the ring of 11th hour,
Nothing to loose,
But much to gain.
The fight , not to live;
But to survive.
Justice in one hand,
Truth in other,
What have i gained at last?
Nothing in this world,
Something is waiting in other.
It’s my hope,
Which pulls my life on and on,
It still goes on and on....

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  1. Date: 5/25/2013 10:54:00 AM
    David, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 2:43:00 AM
    There is still much in this world. Your writing is of a universal feeling. Welcome to the Soup. Rick

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    Date: 5/12/2013 8:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks rick.