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Playful Love-Fate

The beat of a heart moving fast
Reaching out the last breath can breathe
The palms are getting cold
It becomes pale willing to fall

Years have past for thousand lies
With false smiles and false love
For he knew to count different me
Tear my dreams and future for him

A whisper whispering me to kill my own self
After to know the biggest revelation came
The fearless other one that he loved was...
A girl that I love most and brings my blood

How can I live with her?
How can I turn my eyes to her?
The loathing spirit pushing myself
For them who put evil on my head!

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  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:35:00 AM
    Definately pinches. Well expressed!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 5:33:00 PM
    This is great, a clear depiction of your pain. wonderfully written

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 6/23/2013 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes Emily... thank u for the visit
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Your work is well constructed and pleasant reading... You capture the spirit of the deceit we sometimes find in a painful love.... Jake

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/24/2013 4:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you John
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 8:57:00 AM
    This is very strong & hard hitting. Excellent job!

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/16/2013 12:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake!
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 1:23:00 PM
    hello my friend we live to learn i think to acknowledge the pain speeds the cure i hope this helps thank you

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/20/2013 3:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks kevin
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Hi dear Elai! Yes,indeed you`re pinching my heart with this one:) Very deep about love vs fate.Keep smiling too my friend.Have a splendid weekend:) Hugs,Arild

    Cee Avatar Elai Cee
    Date: 5/10/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Arild!
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 11:51:00 AM
    Hi poets!!! Hope to enjoy reading this and can give something that pinch your heart ! ....keep smiling---------elai