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Heavenly View

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Heavenly View

Who lives in a meadow like this
Who lives behind the door in the tree
With a beautiful view must be like heavenly bliss
"I do "said Mrs Mouse with my vast family.

My neighbours the Voles are snugly fast asleep
They are a bit aggressive, their areas to fight for,
day and night a vigil they keep
against all invaders, its a tiring chore

This is a busy busy meadow amongst its vast flowers
the bees and wasps hum searching for pollen for their hives
The daisies, buttercups, are their water cups after the showers
Insects and bugs live here  for the birds to survive.
 
The favourite visitors to this field are the children 
Daisy chains made and worn, running and  playing ball
Waiting  hungrily hoping the hamper has plenty within
Food is devoured, crumbs left, a banquet for all

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  1. Date: 5/14/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Love this Seren, glad i've got here to read this, also ask and hope things are fine with you...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/14/2013 10:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Harry how are you . Lovely to see you...Seren
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 8:15:00 PM
    This is a beautiful write my friend! It's nice to see you back and posting again! You have enlightened me with the splendor of this incredible poem! What a detailed, descriptive piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/9/2013 8:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Russell one I wrote in hosp. Thanks for commenting ...Seren
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 7:59:00 PM
    Lovely , even heavenly poem :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/9/2013 8:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank u my friend ....Seren
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 7:44:00 PM
    Oh how I love the visuals, a wonderfully written piece. Rick

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 5/9/2013 7:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rick .....Seren