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A Pencil World

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A Pencil World

A pencil world, there are marks everywhere I’m formed by some pencil streaks on paper She lives on this paper, a grand image Standing on some raggedly made passage Lines to form the walls and shadows abound I see myself in strange footage around Seeing everything in only line form Crafts mastery in circular reform I can sense she’ll approach with her strange arms And aligned with pieces of pencil charms This page envelopes me, confines me more My brain still functions, not sure what I’m for My world is a bunch of stray pencil marks Drawn onto a paper as some remarks
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 5/11/2013 5:23:00 AM

    Interesting doodles that you do..She must be a poetic work that you keep writing about..Enjoyed reading this morn..I am glad that I found this one today...I hope that this week end is special for your family in celebration of Mother's Day..Thanks for high honor of being in the winners' list in your contest..I enjoyed writing that work..Each time I read it myself I get a different interpertation..Thanks for your many visits to read my work..Sara

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 8:43:00 PM

    This fascinated me and I didn't want it to finish. :) Great write, Russell. It's captivating.

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 4:13:00 PM

    A wonderfully crafted Sonnet you penned here Russell. You always think of new ideas to write about, a true poet indeed. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:59:00 PM

    A word here and a word there ........... where are the words I wrote yesterday ..... find some old words ---- words - lines - words - wooow ... it became a very good poem! - Well done Russell. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)