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GROOVING

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GROOVING



After raking hours of 24/7 toil this brain wants to spin with ole jazz’s request… 14th Road at 8 pm sprays lint upon feet much too slow for a jig of a night dance. Somehow, the breeze leaps to resurrect my wired head, as the gravel hiss of the sax purrs and pulsates, allowing some tangy vapor to restore the voice of passion and slice of lust in unbridled recklessness that thrusts upon nerve endings for an evening of choral notes bursting with alchemy. Dazzling to the beat in steel of moonlight, each velvet croon tastes a Coltrane groove as swaying hips bob to the pulse of sweet chaos. I hit the floor barefoot with raw notes climbing into my belly in the heat of brass pitch… after work, the smoky timbre rolls on and on as waxed pipe of rhythm and blues floats, much thirsty for a Friday’s raw dance. Giorgio Venetopoulos' Jazzy Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 5/28/2013 11:58:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, my friend Nette. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 9:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your jazzy win my friend. AO

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 7:26:00 PM

    Nette, congrats with your jazzy poem... luv~PD

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 4:52:00 AM

    Many Congratulations xx

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 8:17:00 PM

    Very nice. Congrats.

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 7:22:00 PM

    Congratulations, nette. It goes without saying, you know your jazz.

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 7:15:00 PM

    Excellent Jazz mood. Congratulations Nette

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 6:58:00 PM

    A number one in my book. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 6:03:00 PM

    A dance within a jazzy poem. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 5:54:00 AM

    Nette, enjoyed every line! Thanks! Jimbo

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 12:43:00 AM

    raw dance, YES, I think you have captured its essence, Nette. A SURE winner!!

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 4:11:00 PM

    Wonderful Jazzy enjoyed. Thanks and wish you good luck. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 12:46:00 PM

    You have captured the mood! Well done!

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 7:01:00 PM

    David Sanborn has a hit that makes my mood everytime. and his note sounds like words i feel them as i play the song over and over. good work with this musical piece.

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 3:22:00 PM

    I love the raw dance that you describe, there is something special when you hear Jazz! You have told your poem here with such a spectacular charm my friend! I have been busy all day, from early morning to late afternoon, you know how it goes, child's doctors appointment your own doctors appointment, and coming to find out I have a thyroid problem, my daughter is fine though (thank goodness)! It could have been worse! I feel much better having read this poem! Thank you for writing this piece!!

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 10:51:00 AM

    - Dance a lot when you're young and light of foot ...... when you get old you will be heavy and thick .... lol. - Beautifully written Nette. - Good luck in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:47:00 AM

    Sounds like a fun evening dancing barefoot to the music. Nicely written and good luck in the contest. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:24:00 AM

    Winner for sure that is in my opinion..Enjoyed reading your jazzy tune..Thanks for stopping by..I haven't looked at Frank's contest so I guess that I should if I have one that might match up..Hope that this is a great day for you..Sara

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 8:12:00 AM

    Cheers to the Coltrane grooves! I want to go dancing now! My hips are ready! This was a fun ride!

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 7:02:00 AM

    Dance: The logic of feet, the moment when body and soul unite in expressing the inner self! Your poem a dance of words and moods that charms the reader! Thank you! Hugs!

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 5:24:00 AM

    Nette, the words bursting with alchemy do a dance of jig here, amazing!! Jag

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:45:00 AM

    You wove such beautiful images into every line of this poem, Nette! :) I can't make my writing colorful like that! Great write. I know this will do extremely well in the contest. Thanks for your visit to my work. :) Hugs