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Haiku 23

Timothy Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Haiku 23

beneath
hunter's boot
a pine cone cracks

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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 7:43:00 PM

    It was so nice to hear from you GREAT work and with less than 17 too!Light & Love

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/9/2013 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debbie! I am so happy you like it :D... It's rare when I can write one below 10.... 'tis a challenge!
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 2:44:00 PM

    This makes me think of danger!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/9/2013 11:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm glad you got the feeling. After hours of silence I don't think a pine cone cracking bodes well with the hunter... lol.
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 1:58:00 PM

    Right up my alley, Timothy...You know I love this one!..gotta step over those pine cones, though...haha.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/9/2013 11:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I just KNEW you would comment on this one Caleb. Not based on real experience, however...
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 4:04:00 AM

    A pine cone cracks under the weight of a hunter`s boot. Vivid description. Beautiful Haiku 23.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks Date: 5/9/2013 11:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I try to make haiku as short and concise as I can. Thanks for reading and connecting with the image.