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Revenge

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Revenge

Revenge
Watching as you gasp for air
Clenching at the liquid filling your lungs
Your eyes echo your despair
Admonishing the saints to which you clung
The weights drag you down
Pleading my name you thrash to the surface
Calmly waiting as you drown
Vengeance is now my hearts only purpose
So sure you were the only one
How could you have been so clearly blind
Like eyes staring at the sun
Unable to see what dangers linger behind
Overcome you lose the will
Fearful frozen gaze as you sink like a stone
The water ripples into a still
As your death will now give life to this clone
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  1. Date: 5/15/2013 2:07:00 AM
    Powerful words and so Deep. i love it. :)

    the Wordsmith Avatar Drakavai the Wordsmith
    Date: 5/15/2013 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    appreciate that, it was based from a dream :)