Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

Moods

david scott Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Moods which was written by poet david scott. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by david scott

Best David Scott Poems

+ Fav Poet

Moods

It was easer in my prime, in my twenties
Then would be this place I would allude
Ive a nicle nor a dime, down to the pennies
Though never used to care much for food

Back then was just sublime, the nineties
Though then I did have a different attitude                                                
Emotional, is it a crime these tendencies?
I'm asked why I'm always in such a mood

I whine, are we not our own worst enemies
And here I am yet again drowning in solitude
Not feeling so fine, surviving on amenities                 
Im told boo hoo!, though people can be rude
 
Now a different time and space, now memories
But here is just some where that I want to elude
If I could again find cloud nine, but out of remedy’s
So I think for now maybe it's better I just conclude 


Again with this doing what I did with other writes
Kaliedoscope/older and wonderer playing around with words
some of these taken from old poem sublime
some from a poem I wrote called introspection
just againexpressing day to day feelings

MOODS,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
inspierdby past and current events
written by myself davidsott,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, feb 2013






                                     








Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 1:03:00 PM

    David...Bravo! I love your word choices and reflection given to your life experience. I relate to so much of this beautiful poem. Especially the "drowning in solitude". I also love " If I could again find cloud nine, but of remedies". I am sure we all must have these feelings.

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:36:00 AM

    Good morning my sweet friend David from Texas, thank you for all the nice and lovely visits in the past. After seeing and hearing the things that go on in this world, gives me reason to pray and never take my true poet friends for granted. Enjoy the greatest people and things in life. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *LINDA

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 8:57:00 PM

    You expressed moods very well David ...

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 1:45:00 PM

    yes, this one reads like moods!! showing different moods that the different years have inspired in you!

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:12:00 PM

    Nice poem.