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Below is the poem entitled Awake which was written by poet jaanam pokhrel. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Awake

LIKE a demon's sleep, i could rest myself
being a bird to fly for the heavens sake,
i could flow the world like river itself,
holding my breath upon the forsaken breeze of faith,
i could let my hope awake.....


like a blind sees, i could feel the world myself
being a shadow to follow, where the truth take
i could create the heaven like the god himself
feeling the clusters of soul in nothingness,
i could let the cold of pain awake....

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:50:00 PM
    Jaanam, Congratulations with your awesome winning free verse poem... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:54:00 PM
    congrats on your win in the contest. take care cory

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Lovely piece! Kim

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:15:00 AM
    thanks all of you, for your comments

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:40:00 PM
    this is a nice poem, CONGRATS!! SKAT

    pokhrel Avatar jaanam pokhrel
    Date: 5/20/2013 9:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK U s.k.a.t
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:36:00 PM
    Congratulations with your impressive winning word play poem, ... Take Care <3 xox <3 LINDA

    pokhrel Avatar jaanam pokhrel
    Date: 5/20/2013 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ..
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 1:32:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. AO

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 7:12:00 AM
    Great write thanks for submitting Kim

    pokhrel Avatar jaanam pokhrel
    Date: 5/20/2013 9:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you too..
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 12:38:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poem.