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Gloomy Soldiers

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Gloomy Soldiers

Eyes like cynthia's brow
starin beyond the cloud
in a ruminative refine gaze
indelliblely staring skyward

the men of the shadow deviced it
like a rustling of a dry leaf
He has rustled up,
and cross the rubicon....

Man is now cruel..
Man is bestial and blustery
Man is now a canal beast..

O why ar you so cruel?
Even to the unguilty
Yes! He was not a hood
you take even the unguilty
when ravening like a wild beast...
For who to take next
In this gloomy world...

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  1. Date: 6/4/2013 1:31:00 PM

    FEEL IT BRO IT WORTH IT

  1. Date: 5/26/2013 10:16:00 AM

    Thaks SKAT.... Its in memory of a friend that was accidentially killed by the cop....... tanx alot for ya comment

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 10:35:00 AM

    ;-) Hi Andrew, Rustling of dry leaf's. gloomy imagery forsure!! seems as he has blame life over his ordeal... i like the title. it gave this raving solider a gloomy imagery through out the poem. ~SKAT

    Joseph Avatar Andrew Joseph Date: 5/26/2013 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tanx alot for ya comment....... I wrote the poem for a friend, that is now late, accidentially beaten to death by the cops.......