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Sedoka 9

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Sedoka 9

in between
railroad tracks -
a single blue flower

much like I saw you
this morning - beautiful
in the face of death

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  1. Date: 5/5/2013 3:11:00 PM
    Oh my...the imagery and content superb.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/5/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again Karen. I so enjoy your visits and insightful comments :)
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 1:10:00 PM
    I hope like your potential daughter death has not visited your home.

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/5/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No it hasn't... if something is really personal to me I will make sure to leave a note at the bottom of the poem (or at least make it very obvious that it's something that actually happened).
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 8:53:00 AM
    WOW! A unique Sedoka filled with true love... very moving indeed!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/5/2013 11:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nice to see you stop by Jack! :)
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 8:53:00 AM
    wow, this is so wonderful. I am not sure about sedoka, but I think you have indeed captured the essence of one!! And about beets, yes those had crossed my mind, so I went back and stuck them into my poem for ya!! Luv, Andrea

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/5/2013 11:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww that's so sweet, Andrea. Lol... didn't think you'd actually edit it for just little ole me... but I thank you!
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 5:48:00 AM
    This allegory is surely incredible my friend! You have written a tremendous poem here! Another lovely piece, a wondrous poem, Great Work!!

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/5/2013 11:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again Russell. Your comments always cheer me up!
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 5:47:00 AM
    Moving work here! Peace &Blessings Matthew Anish

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/5/2013 11:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Matthew... appreciate your visit!
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 2:54:00 AM
    Wow, awesome Tim, allegorical. Rick

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 5/5/2013 11:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rick. I enjoy the sedoka form very much.