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Dry months

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Dry months

Dry Months


A Dracula drought drank soil’s blood,
in spring and clouds refused to shed
their load of collected sorrow before
the middle of October.

The landscape jaundiced and leaves on
trees petrified into rusty bits of metal
that clanked abjectly in a breeze that
tasted of dust and reheated air.

In the stale heat of the night thoughts
ran free to dream of mountain lakes,
deep fiords and cascades of sweet water
in a landscape green and wondrous.

Teasingly, heavy clouds came from
the north shed loads of liquid pearls that
rolled like tobacco spittle on parched
ground and nature held its breath.

The downpour didn’t last very long,
but long enough for the landscape to
not give up hope and become a new
Sahara only fit for scorpions.

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  1. Date: 5/5/2013 7:28:00 AM
    Dear Jan, I am in awe today dear friend. Your poem is a piece of a parched heaven. So many stunning descriptives lace "Dry Months": leaves on trees petrified into rusty bits of metal, night thoughts of sweet water. Tobacco spittle. This is my new Jan Oskar favorite. Thank you for your comment at Whispers - Mikey likes it. love, Kathy

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 5/5/2013 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Kathy...
  1. Date: 5/5/2013 2:29:00 AM
    Very nice... forceful images... Terry

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 5/5/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Terry