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UP AND AWAY

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UP AND AWAY

UP   AND   AWAY

Grumbling rumbling ground falls silent
She feels for freedom with delight
And her wing flaps’ gentle movement
Lets her  scale  invisible height

Shining metal sheets  a-polish
Steeply sloping wings now fly
And massive silver flying fish
Great creature hauls up thru the sky

Rising to the clouds and sun
We hear her engines whine and strain
Hold our breath and urge her on
Thru the sea of mist and rain

Wispy white the clouds are rent
Engines sing their song now soft
Purring  as the tension’s spent   
In freedom’s sunlight here aloft

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  1. Date: 7/29/2014 7:44:00 PM
    Syd, congrats on your wonderful winning write.. Your victory was well deserved!

  1. Date: 7/29/2014 2:01:00 PM
    Sidney, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 7:15:00 AM
    Congrats on a great win, dear Sidney.. I so enjoyed the ride.. I don't actually fly... Hugs.. Arlene

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 1:17:00 AM
    Amazing and wonderful write, Congrats. Sidney

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 12:05:00 AM
    And we who are along for the ride are knowing there is no way such a weighty thing can fly. well done and congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 8:51:00 PM
    I enjoyed the adventure in this poem as it took flight! Very nice work, Sidney! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 3:45:00 PM
    So glad to see you writing, yet couldn't think of a thing for this one. Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:26:00 PM
    a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:47:00 PM
    Sidney, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 8:36:00 PM
    I like this one Sidney. Awesome to be flying above the clouds. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:39:00 PM
    I quite enjoyed this writing, Sidney. You were very descriptive in your verbiage and the flow was quite good. Solid ending too. Thanks so much for submitting this to my contest!

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    Date: 7/28/2014 3:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake for reading and liking my effort....best regards Syd
  1. Date: 5/4/2013 7:58:00 AM
    - A enjoyable poem to read!:) - Have a lovely weekend Sidney! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)