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EARTH

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EARTH

Earth

Mono syllables are potent
But are best left  untouched
They call for a gargantuan grasp.


This monumental  mono
Commonplace,though
With a contemporary spin. 
A monologue just wont do.

And without a twin,
Its original  ware ,hard and soft , 
Ever  a  win-win 

Holder of holocausts
Moulder of magnificence
Fairly fed on presaging  gods

Fielding  primordial fate 
Flourishing and floundering
Female-male  fecundity

Llipid  life limpet like stuck
In  non- finite lines, measured out
And treasured  nonetheless
In miles and guiles,
Millennia and   manias

Form: Freeverse
3 May 13
S.Jagathsimhan Nair
For Giorgio's ' Impress me-5' contest.
Motif: Philosophical,  old poem

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  1. Date: 5/15/2013 5:18:00 PM
    I see this one had a top placement, what did I tell you when I first commented? congrats jaggy, it's so well deserved :)

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 7:00:00 AM
    Here to congratulate you on your win, Jag. :)

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 10:58:00 PM
    Wow Jag awesome. Many congrats friend.

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 4:29:00 PM
    What so impressed me about your verse was that you actually 'ran' with the topic, I received way too many verses where the poets did not even delve the surface of the topics potential and YOURS did! Yours was about LIFE warts and all. BIG Congrad's for your originality. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Yes.........outstanding!!!! I am not surprised that this is on top! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 9:20:00 PM
    Yes much deserved win Jag...congratulations

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 3:26:00 PM
    jaggy, the combinations of words that you use are just sublime, and the alliteration is wonderful; impressive poetry as I would expect from you, deserving of a high placement :)

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 6:38:00 AM
    intruiging and delightful in a language that truly mesmerizes, jag... all the best!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Jag...you are great.....loved this....good luck sir...

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 8:35:00 AM
    Intelligent and interesting

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 7:20:00 AM
    - An interesting poem to read Jag - Wish you luck in the contest. - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)