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Glossy Blooms

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Glossy Blooms

Glossy blooms floating all around you 
as the lure of the fairy realm surrounds
married mortals, to bring them to human life. 

Gazing at you with such sparkle in their eyes 
leaving shells on the ninth wave as they call 
your name, nine times on the lakes shore.

Glossy blooms floating all around you 
name your lost love as you strike 
a match nine times more.
  
Beyond the morning glossy bloom
Fairy lovers fly around with glum
as you feel the moon and soft breeze. 

The fairy dances may come to please   
they gaze upon you with face in bloom  
as the pretty young fairies catch your eyes.

And you fall under them hypnotized 

The glossy blooms floating all around
winter in the fairy woods has come around
shells on the ninth wave calling your name. 

Watch out, you might get caught in the fairy ring. 


4/ 21/ 2013

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 3:12:00 PM
    Another beautiful poem from you Debbie. I am almost inclined to believe in fairies now. excellent write, as usual Peter

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/19/2013 12:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you Peter ;}
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 4:09:00 PM
    A fairy ring and the number nine seems to be sprinkled with magical dust. A cute whimsical poem.. love phyl

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/15/2013 1:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Phyllis ;}
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Good morning Debbie, i'm happy to hear you had a nice mother's day... and got your computer back. it was nice reading this poem again... now i wonder what will happen to me if i get caught in the fairy ring... :-)... xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/22/2013 12:01:00 AM
    Whimsical writing, Debbie. I wonder what's this obsession with number 9... it seems the flowers are trying to tell me something important... hmm...

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:35:00 PM
    Aha, a fairy ring!! I think you know a lot about them from this cute little poem you penned. Nice to see you back!

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:01:00 PM
    Saying, 'If you loved Me then you would rejoice, for I am returning unto My Father.' I find your verse most applicable amid this light it's realm and Spirit. Fascinating, and our eyes within this state can merely imagine the wonders beyound our view ? But these are as real and tangible unto they than anything we in this humanity have ever known. Let us thus plant these truths into her ninth wave and may the fairies say, sing, 'Come all ye faithful joyful as triumphant. Quite lovely this intriguing yet enchanting verse. Also, thank you precious lady, for your kind visit. Love, John

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 6:59:00 PM
    Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh Yeah did I meantion how much I love this poem poet

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:22:00 AM
    This is a stunning piece. Oh how the fairy can make or break us. Excellent!

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 5:18:00 PM
    Debby, you should arrange your avatar with you standing on a big clam shell like in Botticelli's "The Birth of Venus". You have a lot of charm. Note that I have been extremely busy of late. I am so sorry that I haven't dropped you a line until now. I hope you know that I will always come back this way (until I am disabled or dead)! Your poem is that of a mystic on some level. A lot of fun to read and visualize.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/21/2013 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Duke ;}
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 7:08:00 PM
    COOL LOVE LEGENDS GREAT WRITE. AND THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG TO RESPOND BACK BUT I'VE BEEN WORKING ON SOME NEW WRITES. AGAIN NICELY WRITTEN

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/21/2013 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cherl ;}
  1. Date: 5/10/2013 12:12:00 PM
    - Excellent, Debbie ! - Love it ! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/21/2013 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne ;}
  1. Date: 5/8/2013 9:32:00 AM
    Nice surrealistic descriptiveness in this write. Good job.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/21/2013 12:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Robert ;}
  1. Date: 5/6/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Fairy, fairy quite contrary to what I believe. But if there are then on a star I'll wish them to conceive. Enrapting me in all their joy and fanciful delight. For if you wish upon a star it's sure to come in sight. Love your Alice in wonderland sense of life Debbie. May your world outside be as wonderful as the world inside your mind. Peace. :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/21/2013 12:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    love your rely robert ;}
  1. Date: 5/4/2013 10:35:00 PM
    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Nicely done I'm very good at reading poems like this but I love the matephores in this poem. Excellent poem poet.

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 5:12:00 AM
    Interesting work that you have penned..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Thanks for your visit..Your reviews are always encouraging..Sara

    Kendrick Avatar Sara Kendrick
    Date: 5/4/2013 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Debbie, Indigo Bunting is a bird that is around here..I have only sighted them about three times in my lifetime. They are about sparrow size with the male being a very dark blue and the female colored about like a sparrow with some blue on her.. Sara
  1. Date: 5/3/2013 3:29:00 PM
    Very fantastical Debbie ...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/21/2013 12:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Donna ;}
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 5:31:00 PM
    Debbie, I thought of the song Run Away Train... when I wrote that one song... :-)... thank you for always guessing at my poetry right... xox~ Linda

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/2/2013 6:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 5/2/2013 5:08:00 PM
    I want to get caught in the fairy ring. I am already hypnotized by the imagery in your fairy glittery poem. I don't know but I find this very pretty Debbie, I don't read many poems about fairies, and their realms... this is epic, and captivating... xox~ Linda

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 5/2/2013 5:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I thank you Linda xo's