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Death

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Death

Another breath, another cut,
Cut until I can’t hear your thoughts.
Thoughts of you fuel my rage. 
Rage pent up like a beast in a cage.
Long are the nights of crying
Crying over past regrets, what might be and what could be.
Can’t someone take away this misery?

But death, death hears my pleas. 
But death, death knows my pain. 
But death, death tempts me with his offer again.
Do I go with him this time or do I stay?
I’ll only stay another day. 

Another breath, another cut
Cut until I can’t hear your thoughts.
Thoughts of you fuel my rage.
Rage pent up like a beast in a cage. 
Long are the nights of crying.
Crying over past regrets, what might be and what could be.
Can’t someone take away this misery?

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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:21:00 PM
    China, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 7:23:00 AM
    Thank you for your fine poem, you write very well China. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and poems here with us. - Wish you all the best. - (Give comments, to get back) - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 9:24:00 PM
    about your poem: it cuts pretty deep. I wish it would all go away... not life but, death. some emotions in your poems are real heavy... enjoyed your poem...LINDA

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 9:23:00 PM
    China, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Very well written lyrical post. Your talent is evident and if you post more you will develop a following.... Welcome to PSoup..... Jake