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My first Haiku

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My first Haiku

I sometimes wonder,
What life is really about?
Then it dawns on me.

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  1. Date: 4/4/2014 1:18:00 PM
    yeah,,,wonderful write,,,you nailed it

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 4:29:00 PM
    Lovely how life appears after wondering and dwelling on it for so long. Great first haiku...... SKAT

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 11/21/2013 6:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi thanks for the encouragement in my attempt at Haiku. Thank you for writing a nice comment.
  1. Date: 7/11/2013 1:59:00 PM
    - Nice "first" Haiku, Seosamh ! - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 7/12/2013 4:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind comment.
  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:51:00 AM
    to be continued.......... for sure!

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 7/9/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you....I really hope so :)
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 1:33:00 PM
    See! Now that wasn't so difficult, was it?... Great first effort. You're gettin' the hang of it.... Well done.... Jake

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/22/2013 1:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi and thanks for the encouragement.
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 7:33:00 PM
    Part of life is about great poetry like this one...thanks

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/21/2013 7:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading and your very kind words.
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 2:02:00 PM
    We all wonder! When we understand it is somehow a little bit late, unless... Beautiful and deep!

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/13/2013 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you again Demetrios for taking the time to read my poems, I enjoy and admire your poems so much.
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 9:31:00 PM
    I like your first haiku, Seosamh~ i like the way life is ready to wake you up every day... well at least that is the image i pick up in your haiku... enjoyed~ Linda

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/6/2013 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Linda and thank you for nice comment. I look forward to try and improve on this style.
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 8:58:00 PM
    haiku has a way of grabbing you....you will write more, i am certain... great last line!

    De Burca Avatar Seosamh De Burca
    Date: 5/6/2013 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi, thanks for reading and comment. I know I have a lot to improve on this style but looking forward to the challenge.