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Struggle of love

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Struggle of love

Two branches one thin one thick
One small one long
One weak one strong
Through the night branches shake
Beside the lake
Waiting for so long to be together
But it is the weather
That is stopping them;
There love; always for each other
Making them impatient
To hug each other
But it is too far to hug
Blaming the weather there time goes
Blaming the wind their time passes
Oh!! So angry they are;
Waiting for wind to be on their side;
So they can meet where ever they are
At last! Wind blew and branches moved
They met each other At last!!!
But there was no time
Wind blew again and they moved again
Bringing them as far away as it could
Again angry they were
Again waiting for the time
To meet each other where ever they were;
Sorry for them I feel;
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  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:16:00 PM

    Abdullah, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"