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Swallows In The Fog

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Below is the poem entitled Swallows In The Fog which was written by poet Sara Kendrick. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Swallows In The Fog

Moisture coated chair and table
     Silvery fog everywhere
Birds sing happily 'pon wet limbs
     A few fly in thick air

The Swallows are back flying high
     Hunting bugs over fields
Their sonar a guide where sight fails
     Bouncing off bugs their peal 

My thoughts like a three ring circus
     Bouncing around in my head
Foggy confusion dominant
     Time on the porch clear dread

My free time soon to diminish
     Noise, bedlam will increase
Lord, help we take it with patience
     Let my spirit love release

For every good thing there is a bad thing to counter act the joy....

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  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:01:00 AM
    Wonderful piece. I agree with Nette. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 7:08:00 PM
    good stuff,i feel the reality of the pole,s to acknowledge is life thank you

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:17:00 PM
    I like this Sara,,,, I always look on the bright side, there might be a bad side to the good side, but I alway try not to look over there ;} you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 7:37:00 PM
    I rarely give a wow Sara, but this is a WOW. It's truly beautiful, the third stanza I adore, it's a poem in its own right. This goes to my faves. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 7:36:00 PM
    This is by far one of your best poems that you have shared with us on the Soup! I truly loved reading this incredible and enlightening write this evening! What a lovely piece, such a talented quill you hold Sara, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 4:58:00 PM
    A poem of high quality. You are an experienced writer and your arrangement (in the even numbered lines) becomes just of a touch purposely asymmetrical. (Three or three and a half feet) Very comfortable and interesting decision. Thank you for a very nice write.

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:05:00 PM
    again your visual aspects to your poetry is wonderful Sara..

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 12:00:00 PM
    Excellent poem Sara, enjoyed seeing two of my favorites fog and swallows in a poem together.

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:56:00 AM
    patience erases the bedlam... a wonderful poetic approach, sara.. enjoyed this..:)