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WHEN I DIE

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WHEN I DIE

WHEN I DIE


When I die,
What a glorious day it  
Will be!
For
I will get rid of this mortal
Body 
That is known as 
ME! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
      30 APRIL 2013

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  1. Date: 5/1/2013 2:08:00 AM
    I agree with Donna. Don't hurry now! We want you here with us for longer. Just the though upsets me. Lovely write though!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 5/1/2013 3:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will try! Thank you for your concern!
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 10:25:00 PM
    Well heaven is grand but let's keep you around a while eh??? :-) :-) :-) lovely poem

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 5/1/2013 12:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    God willing, I will! Thank you!
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 2:34:00 PM
    I like this simple work of art. It is very strong. Would you consider the order of words (It will be, instead of will it be) to make it even more stronger?

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 4/30/2013 5:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thy will be done! Thank you!
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:11:00 AM
    highly philosophical. Very nice.

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 4/30/2013 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you! It takes one....
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 6:23:00 AM
    This is an enlightening and a far superior write my friend! You have written a masterpiece here my friend! I really enjoyed reading your amazing poem this morning! What a tremendous piece Demetrios! A remarkable poem, Great Work!!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 4/30/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Russell!
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 5:55:00 AM
    When u die,.....then u live.good stuff!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 4/30/2013 5:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's it! Thank you!