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Our Heart

To taste the salt of your tears that course down your face
My lips kiss them away and now they leave no trace
To feel your heart in sync with mine like a metronome
As they beat together you know you are home.

My love for you grows even though we’re apart
You know your two hands caress one half of our heart.
To wash away all fears and doubts this I would do 
The script is already written with parts for just two

The words are all scribed the paper is now full
There can be no erasing though heart strings do pull
To lean on your chest with arms holding me so tight
You, the dawn and the sun, and the stars shining bright

Life is difficult our paths mapped out long ago
In warmth and love seeds of hope a new path can grow




© Mandy Tams ~GG~29/04/2013


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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:25:00 PM
    this is lovely. Is it for the love letters contest maybe?

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/30/2013 2:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No that one has to be free verse I think Andy, oh and thanks xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:18:00 PM
    Beautiful to the core. I love the imagery of the hands holding the heart brings it to great heights of endearment

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/30/2013 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Karen xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Hi Mandy love the new path, and the love and warmth your beautiful mind creates here, the poem is so heartfelt, and so sincere, and believe me, sonnets don't get much better than this....

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/30/2013 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks harry, a lovely compliment and always appreciated xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:09:00 PM
    - Mandy, this is the most beautiful poem I've read in a long time!! (Mean it with all my heart) - Thank you, thank you, thank you!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)..... Was Arild here before me .... hmmmm....lol. - //

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/29/2013 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you Anne lise I really appreciate that and yes Arild beat you love xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Beautiful....ahhhhh....love. Mandy, this was a beautifully refreshing sonnet I came home to...sweet.??B

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/29/2013 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bless you Eileen xx
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/29/2013 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ok....so the hearts from my phone don't come through....hugs then :-)
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 4/29/2013 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Know what,Mandy? I feel like am home again after Reading this beautiful and romantic poem:-) God knows I missed you guys! Hugs and Love,Arild

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/29/2013 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You been gone a long time Arild, nice to see you back xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:48:00 AM
    Very romantic Mandy. I like the idea that each person has the others heart. With them regardless of where they are.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/29/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard we all hold someones heart in our hands we just have to make sure they are safe ones.xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:40:00 AM
    Bravo, Mandy. I love the gentle flow of your poem. I like your phrase "our heart". Beautiful writing, my friend. :)

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/29/2013 6:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bless you Delysia, such a pretty name you have xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:37:00 AM
    This reminds me of a song of old Mandy So sentimental, a sonnet was the appropriate form for this beauty, you have so many sides of you Mandy, just saw another side today, love this one too,have a great day, Sunshine Girl, glow in it, it fortifies the soul and bronzes the skin, love to you xxx

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/29/2013 6:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rose, hope they are all good sides xx