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Our Heart

To taste the salt of your tears that course down your face
My lips kiss them away and now they leave no trace
To feel your heart in sync with mine like a metronome
As they beat together you know you are home.

My love for you grows even though we’re apart
You know your two hands caress one half of our heart.
To wash away all fears and doubts this I would do 
The script is already written with parts for just two

The words are all scribed the paper is now full
There can be no erasing though heart strings do pull
To lean on your chest with arms holding me so tight
You, the dawn and the sun, and the stars shining bright

Life is difficult our paths mapped out long ago
In warmth and love seeds of hope a new path can grow




© Mandy Tams ~GG~29/04/2013


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  1. Date: 9/10/2014 7:28:00 PM
    Mandy, you crafted a textbook sonnet.... Congratulations..... Love ya dearly....Jake

  1. Date: 9/3/2014 10:44:00 PM
    Wonderful and beautiful piece,Mandy..Congrats on your well deserved win...

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/4/2014 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Olusegun nice to hear from you xx
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 8:00:00 PM
    Congratulations Mandy. Very beautifully written poem of love.

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    Date: 9/4/2014 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Brenda xx
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 4:00:00 PM
    Your first line pulls me in - to taste the salt of your tears.. most people cry and hide their face.. what a poem with vision.. congrats with the write and win

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/4/2014 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Elly ..a lovely comment xx
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 8:18:00 AM
    Lovely images, congrats on the win, Mandy

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/3/2014 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dr Ram xx
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 7:58:00 AM
    You ARE a GOLDEN GIRL, Mandy. This is sweet and affectionate. I love the lines that Carolyn shared in her comment. Beautiful. Congrats on your wonderful win! Hugs!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/3/2014 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Much appreciated Eileen , thanks xx
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 6:07:00 AM
    Dear Mandy, "You know your two hands caress one half of our heart." What a beautiful way to describe a close relationship. I do believe our paths have been mapped long ago, but with the freedom of choice, we can find new paths that grow. Congratulations on a great win! Love, Carolyn

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/3/2014 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Caroline thank you so much xx
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 4:31:00 AM
    - CONGRATULATIONS WITH FIRST PLACE IN THE CONTEST, MANDY !!! - I see that I've read this before .... but many poems have come and gone since then ..... - Enjoy reading it again ..... Beautiful poem that really deserved to win - I wish you a great day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/3/2014 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi there Anne Lise , many thanks love xx
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 2:53:00 AM
    'Oh Mandy, well you came and you gave without taking'...Barry LIED! You stole my heart you wonderful and talented thief! Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order...

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/3/2014 11:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks Tim , I really appreciate the comments xx
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 1:02:00 AM
    Fabulous write Mandy! Congrats on well deserved huge win!

  1. Date: 9/3/2014 12:39:00 AM
    this is so fantastic and dreamy,mandy.. much enjoyed.. rounds of applause to you!

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/3/2014 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aw nette bless you ..thanks love xx
  1. Date: 9/3/2014 12:20:00 AM
    Thank you for entering my contest. I love your poem. God bless you and happy writing.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/3/2014 11:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Reginia for placing me xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:25:00 PM
    this is lovely. Is it for the love letters contest maybe?

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/30/2013 2:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    No that one has to be free verse I think Andy, oh and thanks xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:18:00 PM
    Beautiful to the core. I love the imagery of the hands holding the heart brings it to great heights of endearment

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    Date: 4/30/2013 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Karen xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:58:00 PM
    Hi Mandy love the new path, and the love and warmth your beautiful mind creates here, the poem is so heartfelt, and so sincere, and believe me, sonnets don't get much better than this....

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/30/2013 2:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks harry, a lovely compliment and always appreciated xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:09:00 PM
    - Mandy, this is the most beautiful poem I've read in a long time!! (Mean it with all my heart) - Thank you, thank you, thank you!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)..... Was Arild here before me .... hmmmm....lol. - //

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    Date: 4/29/2013 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks you Anne lise I really appreciate that and yes Arild beat you love xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Beautiful....ahhhhh....love. Mandy, this was a beautifully refreshing sonnet I came home to...sweet.??B

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/29/2013 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bless you Eileen xx
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    Date: 4/29/2013 8:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ok....so the hearts from my phone don't come through....hugs then :-)
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    Date: 4/29/2013 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Know what,Mandy? I feel like am home again after Reading this beautiful and romantic poem:-) God knows I missed you guys! Hugs and Love,Arild

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    Date: 4/29/2013 1:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You been gone a long time Arild, nice to see you back xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:48:00 AM
    Very romantic Mandy. I like the idea that each person has the others heart. With them regardless of where they are.

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 4/29/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard we all hold someones heart in our hands we just have to make sure they are safe ones.xx
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:40:00 AM
    Bravo, Mandy. I love the gentle flow of your poem. I like your phrase "our heart". Beautiful writing, my friend. :)

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    Date: 4/29/2013 6:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bless you Delysia, such a pretty name you have xx
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