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Haiku - X 13- Boston Bombs

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Haiku - X 13- Boston Bombs




                                               One lovely ballerina
                                            The bombings slammed
                                                No more dancing






28.04.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 1/25/2014 1:41:00 PM

    A most concise write Anne-Lise. A most dreadful thing to happen, I could never understand any reason for this for there is none. It is so strange,, a terrible scene and yet in three gentle lines you say it all. What is our world coming to. Before I end, I must ask, "Who's the cutesie in the avater?" I don't think I put that right, but you know what I mean. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always.... Mike. A most interesting Haiku Anne-Lise.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 1/25/2014 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Tragedy - much hate in this world - Bomber kills not just one ... but many !!!- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Mike. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 6/4/2013 1:20:00 AM

    Concise and deadly sharp.. A good piece

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 6/4/2013 1:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Arnab. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/27/2013 2:02:00 PM

    again, your metaphors glide and deeply express this tragic scene with such agility, anne.. enjoyed passing through your past poems... sheer delight!.. happy day!..:) hugggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/28/2013 1:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 1:05:00 PM

    That was such a sad day indeed and I think you captured one of the victims' stories well here-- thank you for passing by my poem... I hope all is well with all of you and belated Happy Mother's Day hugs to you!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/13/2013 2:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    E.P, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/9/2013 1:38:00 PM

    A fine poem

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/9/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Katherine, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 12:16:00 AM

    That captures the brutality of these terrorist. Contrasting the most fragile image with the most brutal...well done SuZ

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/2/2013 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Suzanne. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 11:24:00 PM

    Tragedy expressed in so few words! Excellent!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/1/2013 11:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Demetrios, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 3:42:00 PM

    that's was a sad event, lets hope it won't happen again,thanks for sharing it,God bless you,Hugs!Erich

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/1/2013 11:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Erich, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 10:01:00 AM

    Sad event...so very sad and cruel. Your haiku says so much ...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/1/2013 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 12:45:00 PM

    Good haiku here Anne Lise.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Kash. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 8:39:00 AM

    The affect of bombing nicely depicted with the example of one lovely ballerina. You always use golden words with beautiful imagery. Thanks....., loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2013 9:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 5:30:00 AM

    I'm sure they think it's harmless, but now-a-days everything's about having fun but they're taking it too far.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2013 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for taking the time to respond Emily. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
    Schaffer Avatar Emily Schaffer Date: 4/30/2013 5:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Btw, this is a response to you're comment.
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:02:00 AM

    Hit right to the core, Anne-Lise. I love your poetry. You are truly gifted at gripping the reader. A true tearjerker this is...something we can relate to emotionally what with the Boston bombing...etc... Always, Laura

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2013 3:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Laura. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 2:53:00 AM

    ugly face of terrorist distortion of beauty nice haiku Anne thanks to share

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2013 3:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Sallam. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 12:34:00 AM

    Excellent. Simple and deep haiku. Well done.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2013 1:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Ravi. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:31:00 PM

    Very deep Anne, not a pleasant memory on the topic... always~

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2013 1:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Linda. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 5:56:00 PM

    A very wonderful Haiku that expresses the loss from the Boston Bombings. Thank you for your comment on my poem Memories Beyond The Door. Please keep me in your prayers for tomorrow, I'm having a partial thyroidectomy. I'll be back Wednesday. Love, Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2013 1:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    <3 + <3 //<3+<3 Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Gail. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:57:00 PM

    I''m doing great anne :) how are you? everything here has been going pretty good, just tons and tons of end of the school work, it is horrible but we got to pass these tests haha

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2013 1:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is is sure go fine - just do your best - Good Luck !!! Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:37:00 PM

    still touchin gme as i re-read this again and again, anne... have a great day!...:) hugggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/30/2013 1:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I have many others to choose. / / Thanks :) - oxox// Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 10:02:00 AM

    I really enjoyed this haiku, seeing as there are so many at my school already making fun of it. I can't understand how they could be so heartless and it was nice to see that someone else felt differently :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 10:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Emily. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 8:00:00 AM

    This packs a punch Anne Lise, no need for more words you say it all here, I will rate it a ten, have a great day love xxx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for 10 ,visit and your comments on my Haiku poem M.R. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 7:01:00 AM

    Yes, her swan song. Enjoyed. Love, daver

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Daver. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:35:00 AM

    Short and POWERFUL! Great!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 6:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Persian. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:27:00 AM

    Darn...you really hit hard with this one, Anne...well done!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 6:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Caleb. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 3:12:00 AM

    Such evil, poetically penned. This really got to me too. Wrote a haiku about it at the time "Tempered Grace"-- thanks for always stopping by my poems xx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 5:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 8:54:00 PM

    Sooo sad. I abhor violence in any form. Nice haiku, Anne-Lise. :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 1:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Delysia. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 8:31:00 PM

    such a sad one. Thanks for thinking of Boston, Anne Lise.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 1:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:32:00 PM

    These few words are so heart wrenching and lovely at the same time. Thank you.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 1:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Abigale. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 3:07:00 PM

    How true. The terrible cost of violence. Nicely done. Jack And a fine week to you too.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2013 1:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:47:00 PM

    This is a wonderful Haiku! I really enjoyed reading this glorious poem this afternoon! What a powerful image you have painted here Anne-Lise, Great Work!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/28/2013 2:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Russell. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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