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Falling Through The Cracks- A Different Kind of Tanka

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Falling Through The Cracks- A Different Kind of Tanka

A heart full of love

Booked to the capacity
                               I
                                fall 
                                   through
                                             the 
                                                   c    r    a    c    k    s 
Too weak to run for safety

                             I’m trampled  u
                                                    n
                                                       d
                                                         e
                                                           r your feet.

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 9:39:00 AM
    A heartfelt write Eileen, the visual is very effective, the falling and under. You know we can only spread ourselves so far, when these feelings begin, it's time to look carefully at how much we're taking on. There's always the danger we start to be being taken for granted. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:35:00 PM
    Very cool! :-) but do the steppin'. :-)

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Ooooooooh!! I just absolutely, absolutely looooooove the way you penned this tanka! So unique and captivating! Well done, Eileen! :) Huuuuuugs!

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:18:00 AM
    I always admire when poets take that extra step to be that much more creative. The format makes it more of an art form and make people that don't like poetry all that well, a little bit more of a fan. Having too much love for people is a strange problem to have (Rose's comment was quite funny)... I enjoyed this one.

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:33:00 AM
    Sweet Ghali, my falafeil Pali, your too beautiful a woman to be trampled on, grow a few thorns my dear, that will keep the fear of God in them, grow and be blessed, my flower of the hour, xxx

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 4/28/2013 6:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HEE HEE! You like falafels? They are yummy, aren't they? Thank you for seeing me as beautiful...Beauty is in the eye of the beholder...so you have beautiful eyes, my dear. Glad to be your flower of the hour...but I might demand a bit more than an hour. Thanks for the lovely post. Hugs.