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  1. Date: 6/7/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Nice piece! Well put together- Edward

  1. Date: 5/1/2013 11:58:00 PM
    amazing element of surprise, caleb... third line is a wallop... mayve fallen satrs?... marvelous?... :) huggs

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Hello Caleb, thank you for the HOWDY! Made me smile.. I love this list... I don't mind if they are only a b-list... all them falling start have a chance at Happiness, who needs the sidewalk of fame... I love all them b-list movies.. LOL.. xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 11:24:00 AM
    This was so, so clever! Just what happens to those celebrities behind the spotlight, behind closed doors? Their true selves perhaps... what a neat concept wrapped up in a short bite-size poem.

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 11:07:00 AM
    Hi there Caleb! I liked how this can have a couple of other meanings-- btw, thanks for passing by my worst poem! I also read yours and how could they?? I mean about your booger poem?! That was a fine poem if you ask me, catchy and had a nice flow to it! It sorta reminded me of my version of "this little piggy" -as for "run away" I liked how each last word ran away with the next line...

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 10:48:00 AM
    Like the play on the idea..Wonder which star is falling next?...Thanks for stopping by..Those little Terriers will run in their and try their best to take those rattlers down..Did you shoot the snake or dog?..I hope it was the snake..Did the dog survive the attack?..Sara

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 8:15:00 AM
    This is a new format for me--'senryu' Please educate the blonde:) Love the way you use 'brightest' and 'falling' as creative opposites. Thanks for stopping by my poems. Nope-- from South Africa.. not NY city, although have visited the place 3 times and loved the vibe.

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:52:00 AM
    Cool! I love the double meaning. I see you've been taking your creative pills again!

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Short, but certainly not lacking in amazingness! I love it Caleb. :)

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 6:05:00 AM
    Lovely written Caleb - (if a star falls .... there are some that die .... I thought that when I was a child. - But then it would not host stars again) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:26:00 AM
    yes, you had mentioned "richard skinner" to me before. Wish I had the time to go to this!!

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:24:00 AM
    falling stars. Oh I love the way this could be interpreted two ways. Did you ever see the Houses of Beverly Hills? I went on a tour of them many years ago.

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 10:12:00 PM
    Kinda sad one from ya it...

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 8:55:00 PM
    Caleb.....this is a lovely one! :) Very beautiful. BTW...I did read your "worst" poems on PD's blog. I love this so much than the quest for buggers! ;)